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Poor Harry, please update chapter 12 soon _^

Loved it. Need more.

Well done, love!

Wonderful keep up the good work.

And the ministry strikes. It will be interesting to see how the trial plays out differently than in the book seeing as Harry not only has a solicitor but in this world muggles not only feel the Dementors but also see them. Vernon's threat makes many things about Harry clearer. IT will be interesting to see how it comes out so Sirius and Lucius learn about it and what their reactions will be. If Mrs. Figg and Petunia had not been there yelling for Harry to drive about the Demendor, would Harry have let Vernon be kissed? I mean, he could have waited until Vernon had been kissed and then used his patronus showing it was a clear case of self-defense. I wonder why Lucius didn't suggest the mirrors when he was talking to Harry?

I thought it was cute that Eliot wants to pop out of Harry's pocket. This chapter set a lot of things in motion. It will be interesting to see how it plays out. Again great job.

Great fucking story! Totally love it! XD

I wonder what they are going to find out, please update chapter 10 soon.

another chapter soon this was really too short and this story is really to good.

This is going to be one of those stories, I can tell, that there's just never going to be enough available to read. ^__^ And... funnily enough, the second Lucius-Sirius I've come across in my recent fic search/scrounge. Completely unintentional.

So. I'm also picking up more than "simple" neglect towards Harry; more even than a few physical assaults. That, combined with his reaction to Lucius's offer to call him 'uncle', plus his more advanced familiarity and, shall we say 'acceptance' of more "deviant" sexual practices.... leads me to thinking Vernon sexually assaulted Harry, probably more than once. Then turned around and beat him more harshly because of it.

Nice move of Neville to mention to Harry about getting a solicitor. Makes me wonder what all is different, from first year up, how Harry became aware of his estate and the need of a solicitor, how the triwiz was handled...

Mostly, though, I'm hankering for some hot, steamy smex. Seriously. Two hot men. One hot teen. Lots of hot, steamy, kinky sex. Oh! and is there possibly something between Remus and Severus? Or will it just be Severus and Draco?

Looking forward to the next update! Happy writings!

Interesting chapter, new stuff thrown into the mix. It was an interesting dichotomy to see Harry having to make adult decisions about his life while clutching and clinging to Elliot at the same time. A boy who has had to take care of himself and exert control in his life to survive yet the yearning to be comforted and cared for coming through quite loudly. Yet, haven't most, if not all of us been in that position when we wish someone else can make the decisions yet not being able to do so?

Now, what is under the volcano waiting to erupt? I have my suspicions but, as Severus is doing, look at the hints before saying it out loud. Really good chapter, thanks.