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March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh how perfect that chapter was. Dumbledore, the diary and Hermione hiding. Poor Severus, he certainly doesn't have a leg to stand on now.
Incredibly hot recount of their first time. :D
Incredibly hot recount of their first time. :D
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March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well to me the story is called 'Dear Diary' so i think that the start of each chapter should have an entry or part of an entry so we get the story of the past as well as a story of the present. It helps the reader know why Snape may at the way he does or why Hermione feels the way she does, plus if there is conversation about what the students are reading then you don't have to go back to memories because we've already read it. I like this story by the way thank you for writing it and please update soon.
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March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh oh man what's Dumbledore gonna say??? Liking it a lot so far :)
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March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter!
Thanks!
Thanks!
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March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh crap Dumbledore knows. Now lets see if he can "overlook" this indiscretion.
I love to read what is written in the diary, so I wouldn't mind seeing something every other chapter since it would give me something to look forward to. :D
I love to read what is written in the diary, so I wouldn't mind seeing something every other chapter since it would give me something to look forward to. :D
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March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@5 lol there in for some trouble now. Great story. Update soon!!
DB
DB
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March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
If you mix it up with an entry and story its good, post soon!
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February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a very clever way to reveal a much used story line. I simply love the narrative. Great job.
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February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4. Oh dear God, that was incredibly hot and nothing actually happened.
I loved it!!!!!
More please, give us more.
I loved it!!!!!
More please, give us more.
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February 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i am loving this story and i cant wait to see what happens next! i love severus when he is the snarky master and hermione is his slave-or what ever she is going to be and i love that diary pages have been found! i do hope that we get lots more and not just pages of rememberances and that we get more of now time story too!! :) post soon!! PLEASE!