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December 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please for the love of Merlin write a sequel or an epilogue or something! I must know what happens next!
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September 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really, Albus? Really? I love you and all but stop meddling!
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April 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please update. I love this storyline.
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August 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please keep posting! I'd really like to see where it goes from here.
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April 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What a cliffhanger at the end of Chapter 5! Please keep writing!! I like the mix of diary entries and current plot line. I like the structure of Chapter 5 because the diary entry seemed to flow naturally. If there's not a way to make more of the entries flow naturally or for longer entries, I like the use of individual chapters to have the entries. Thanks for writing! I have enjoyed this story so far and can't wait to see what else you write!
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April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was hot u def had my pupils dilating lol. I just looove dominant severus. At first i wasnt sure about the diary entries but u dont make hermione sound too ooc. Aside from minor typos and one wrong word it's great besides who cares about typos when the story is smokin
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March 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
who is leacking the diary enteries?? if its not hermione or and severus?? also surely this part of the entery shows its hermione and severus: I wasn
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March 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
how does the headmaster know its hermione and severus in the diary enteries?? please UPDATE story with more chapters!!!!
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March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is really really good. It's different and I definitely feel like a 17 year old is writing those diary entries while the story takes on a whole other feel. It's fantastic and the descriptions are just delicious. Great work and I'm looking forward to the next update!
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March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Fuck!!!!
Update ASAP please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
Update ASAP please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^