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for Trust of the Elements

by Dracona63

person pickles
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you posted a quick note.
I hope you are okay.
Keep your head up and take care of yourself.
person Cat
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully everything in your life is getting better. I'm excited you're getting back to writing because you are amazing at it. Hopefully they'll keep your story up while you work through everything! Glad you're back.
person Cat
schedule June 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
you are truly evil leaving it off there. I love this, post more soon!
person lolo
schedule June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
just catching on the last few chapters and while this is a great story i have just one little correction for you.. so i'm assuming that you're an american because you wrote that zabini is an african-american but if he grew up in england than he would most likely be either morrocan or african-english or french..
person Thegirl
schedule June 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like it but its evil to leave it there I WANT TO KNOW!! I will just have to hope for a quick update :D thanks
schedule June 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It is, thank you. It was so much easier to read. Great chapter, I can't wait to see who the attacker is. My guess is Mclaggen, he's a prick. I loved the image of the "bear" chasing the boys through the village, that was cute.
person Cat
schedule June 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love this.