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for A new Beginning

by dark-huntressmoony

person delia cerrano
schedule May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
How can Ginny feel that way? After all the boys have some of her also. Just as well since it's easier to get the boys full time if she is so blatant about her feelings. What is Cormac hanging around such a horrible woman? That's going to be quite the mother for his children!
schedule April 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Finished reading the chapters you have posted in one sitting. You have the makings of an interesting story here. Really appreciate the new twist to "Snape is a vampire" plot. Impressed with your characters & how you have integrated James & Albus into the story. I will be pleased to continue reading this story.
schedule April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this fic and I love how you took bits and pieces from some of my favorite vampire series, meshed them together and make them something mew. I have come across Vampire Academy references before but not any references to the Argeneau novels so I loved that and I can;t wait for the next chapter
person Jan
schedule April 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yummy, can't wait for more, please update chapter 8 soon ^_^
person psychosmurf
schedule April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Been enjoying it so far. Hope to see more soon

person delia cerrano
schedule March 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ok more please. Not crazy about vampitres or annalise or stringoli whatever but Severus and Harry together as a couple are always good with me.
schedule February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ch 1- quick question, you said the war was 5 yrs past, but harry's flashback said 3 yrs? so he's either 19ish or 22ish?
schedule February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
very intriguing story so far, i like the concept and i'm curious to see what anna's prophecy is going to play out like. and as for my last review, you've kind of cleared up in the last chapters, but you may want to title harry's flashback to "five years ago" instead of three since he was remembering from the end of the war, not from when he came back to the school. looking forward to more :)
person sara101
schedule February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
.....I love it but you take to loooong to update ~pouty face~ can't wait to find out what happens next. I was like uh oh Harry and Ginny, but she's a bitch and Harry left her so I'm happy. :D
person Fun4me
schedule February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your story. Where are you from? It may be a regional thing, but I think you might be using fallow when you mean to be using follow. They have very different meanings in the US at least.