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for Easy as Falling

by Lomonaaeren

person MsShinra
schedule July 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Gawd! I love your writing! I can't wait for more!
person Nicole
schedule July 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am LOVING this story!! The dynamics betweenhe characters is great! And I can't wait to read where you take them next. Please, continue!
schedule July 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't think Minerva deserves to come back now. She should have to wait until the whole wizarding world has accepted that Harry is doing a great job and not out to take over everything. She shouldn't be able to be headmistress either *stomp* she doesn't deserve it! I'm glad that Ron has come to teach and it was cute how he picked what he wanted and demanded good pay lol. Minerva... I am so annoyed at her for believing a name would change who Harry was.
person delia cerrano
schedule July 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like it when Harry is magically very powerful. Maybe he does things before he thinks things through but his heart is in the right place and I think he goes by instinct a lot. Maybe he thinks very very fast. So fast it looks like he's just doing not thinking. Sort of like he thinks faster then his mouth catchs up with his brain. So that he appears to be acting without thinking but he's really already thought it out. Well I know what I mean anyway.
person SP777
schedule July 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I never viewed Voldermort as powerful until I saw the movies, to me he just knew a lot of Dark magic.
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about #29...

My, has Harry become such a strong young man. I don't know what it is you're doing, but I feel as if
you have more of a connection with certain Harrys that you write...more so than others and it reflects
thru your stories.

Harry as Dark Lord comes across very mature, as he should be. For what it's worth, the way you write him here,
he would make a very good Headmaster, despite whether or not he wants it.

...and his moment with Draco was nice, nothing sexual at all...just honest to goodness comfort, which is nice to read every now & then.

Thus, ends a very sweet chapter.
person delia cerrano
schedule July 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Harry's speech with Minerva and Albus were right on. I can't believe Minerva can't see and agree wth his point. I can't think who he is going to ask for consideration from unless, oh I hope anyway, it's Draco?
person SP777
schedule July 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #28..

1. When it comes to 'Harry as Dark Lord' plots, that would be the time to get ambitious and
get out of your comfort zone & do something extravagant. Therefore, I throw at thee...an idea.

So far, reading your stories over the years [..damn has it been years??], I think I can honestly say...I
can't recall a story where you pitted Harry against someone magically strong & have him fight might for might.

You've done political intrigues, mysteries, romances, things that make you go 'hmm..', but never has Harry fought
an opponent that was strong as him to the point he actually had to retreat, regroup & face his opponent another day.

Ever thought of that?

2. I forgot about McConnagall[sp], who honestly was not thinking straight & was completely out of line. Of course, Harry
handled it in a very mature way....without blasting anyone out of the school. But I know how he feels, it's frustrating when
people don't take you seriously, no matter how old you get.

Personally, he should break down & just be Headmaster, get it over with.

Anyway, good chapter & it was nice to see what was Dumbledore's opinion on what was happening.
person delia cerrano
schedule July 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Continues to be above average and I'm understanding Harry's actions a bit better or you are explaining more in the context of the story. Whatever I'm liking it even more.
person SP777
schedule July 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #27..

...and that was the most splendid display of power that I've ever read & makes
me wish I had seen it on TV. Harry is a great Dark Lord, though he still has some
things to learn. I can't wait to see how he assembles his court and the role it will play.

By the way, Lucius didn't exactly get 'egg on his face', but he WAS put in his place. Nice
touch with the coronets.

You know, I swear this is your 'true calling'...writing Harry as a Dark Lord, you are
absolutely splendid at it.
person streakerboi
schedule July 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story very much... As I do all of your stories! This one is particularly fun and I hope you continue to find fun and exciting waays for Harry to shock and surprize! I love how he manages to leave his admirers and detractors speechless and hope that this will continue. And his display of sheer power... Love that too.