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for Easy as Falling

by Lomonaaeren

person angelmuziq
schedule February 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! I always did like powerful Harry and abitious Draco who is intrigued by Harry. The one shot was such a teaser, I'm glad you decided to expand on it and I hope that you bring it further than the one shot- to see what the Wizarding World does to push Harry over the edge to take over the whole thing. Keep up the great work as always. Also if you ever get the time and a muse strikes you- I've always wanted to read a really well written fic where there is no Voldemort and so Harry's parents are alive and Harry is raised in a way similar to Draco and see how they react to each other. I love confident powerful Harry and being knowledgable about pure blood practices from birth could put a different spin on things. The situations those two could get into when they know the same things and I'm sure other obsticles would get in their way. Anyway something to think about I hope! Can't wait for the next chapter.
person SParker
schedule February 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #4..

Well now, once a Slytherin always a Slytherin. :-)

I was kinda hoping Harry had some type of plan before, Draco came there, but
oh well..

Maybe this will be the start of a *ahem* SOMEwhat beautiful friendship, where
they will be constantly butting heads. But, I get the feeling Draco might be surprised, right?
person delia cerrano
schedule February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh I liked this chapter and the direction the story is taking. But spitting it seems like every time Harry speaks? Ewww!
Hope he doesn't continue that!
person heartstar
schedule February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hmmm interesting draco lol now has his challenge...........
person delia cerrano
schedule February 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I can understand where Harry is coming from. Draco as a politician? I would have thought he would rather be the power behind but very visable behind the throne. That way everyone knows how important he is but he doesn't have to do any boring things like speeches, boring dinners,etc & can claim innocence if something goes wrong.
person qwerty
schedule February 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you're writing this prequel! It's very good so far. Keep writing!
person SParker
schedule February 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #3..

1. So, do you find writing this story..easy? Did you have this planned out
already when you did the one shot?

2. You know, I'm beginning to think there was a writing challenge on 'making Harry
a Dark Lord', because this isn't the first time I've seen this plot idea. I'm just
surprised it took this long for the story idea to make it to THIS section.

3. I think I've said this once before...but DAMN that was a short chapter!!! O_O
schedule February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see how this story will go!!
person addiena saffir
schedule February 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I think Harry's 'Oh shit' is an understatement. lol Looking forward to how he proceeds and to see how and with whom his court was made.
person delia cerrano
schedule February 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well now this looks like it might be a little different. I like Harry having tons of power but still being good. I hope it works out that he & Draco are on the same side though somehow.