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for Easy as Falling

by Lomonaaeren

person delia cerrano
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the fun to start when their plans start going good...want Harry to get revenge on the Ministry for all the pain they've caused him by not backing him, saying he's insane, not believing him, and letting him, a teenager, save everybody while they stayed back safe & sound & for letting Dumbledore use him & placing him with the Dursleys. More Draco/Harry please...they are both seeing that each is different than they used to be.
person SP777
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, the only one I had read was 'Ashborn', which had a convincing plotline, therefore
I had no problem believing that relationship could happen. But, that's where my reading stopped
& I didn't look for any more stories because I really can't see Severus with Harry...much less
Severus with his godson. There has to be a GOOD reason behind it for me to stick with it...and a
bonding makes sense to me.
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about #11...

Fun? Hell, it's going to be interesting to see how THIS one gets pulled off!
person alexkdp
schedule March 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
im dying to know what's gonna happen next. there was mo malfoy-potter scene in this chapter! but it was good. i liked how ron reacted to harry being bonded and how malfoy reacted to the second newspaper article. would love to read more! :D
have a great one.
x
person SP777
schedule March 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #10...

A cold, calculated & cool as a cucumber Harry Potter? Oh, forgive
me I mean...Dark Lord Harry Potter. You know, he needs to change
his name to something cool...

I can't WAIT to see how he puts each one in their place! Hopefully with Draco
coming in with some clever Slytherin counsel.

PS-I've come across your Severus/Harry/Draco stories [didn't realize you
had any] and found one that has given birth to my all time fav character, Harry
the Parrot. Love, Free as Air gives life to Harry the bird, like a REAL life person,
which leads me to believe you definitely know your bird's mannerisms, like the back of
your hand.

How come we don't see Harry the Parrot in this section, your readers here would probably
love him to bits, I know I did. :-)

Oh, AND I have to admit 'Their Phoenix' had me believing in the S/H/D relationship more than
any other story that came after that. I liked how you pulled it off. It's become another favorite.
person Niamh
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! Love how the politics are playing out here, but I wish there was more to read! WAY too short, you're leaving me dying over here!
person alexkdp
schedule March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
that was over way too soon ;) I enjoyed it buckets. while im thrilled with the promise of smut, I do enjoy a good story, well written and moving at a good pace.
and gotta love ron with the biscuits.
and scheming potter is def something i could get used to.
well done.
regards.
person moodysavage
schedule March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Here it is being so sytherin! .
person Anon
schedule March 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really adore this story (although whenever I go on aff I usually expect smut) and sincerely hope you continue and finish it.
person alexkdp
schedule March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
that was a most pleasureable read. please do continue. i love the idea of a dark lord harry potter. i also like how malfoy seems to come to harry's rescue.
will there be smut coming? haha.
keep it up. dont wait too long to update (i'm keeping an eye out for you!)
person BAFan
schedule March 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 3

OMG, Hermione said "fuck"! *blink* Will she ever fully accept what Harry has done? Hope so. It's interesting to see why and how Draco becomes Minister. It's also good to know that Skeeter doesn't target only poor Harry.

"People, Harry had come to realize as with a crack of mystical revelation, were bloody weird." This is perhaps my favorite sentence. Not only is it funny (and sadly true), but it says a lot about Harry's innate sweetness of character that it took him that long to reach that realization.