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for Easy as Falling

by Lomonaaeren

schedule April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ah... now will Draco be able to put a positive spin on Harry's upbringing when he finds out? He'll definitely not like when he hears how muggles treated a wizard.
person alexkdp
schedule April 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hahaha i did not see that coming. and i think its better this way too! malfoy seducing an uninterested/neutral potter would be rather... refreshing.
and then potter not knowing how to react to malfoy's provocations/seduction tactics and malfoy glorifying in the chase.. well lets just say that is pretty hot.
potter not being as affected as malfoy would like intrigues me very much. after all, malfoy wouldnt enjoy something that comes too easily to him - i know i wouldnt.
i loved this chapter - the kiss! the details! loved it.
potter seems very powerful here (more so than draco, not that im saying draco is not powerful) and it would be lovely to see potter brought down to his knees by draco (literally and metaphorically speaking of course) by a man who isnt as powerful as the dark lord himself.
looking forward to how harry is going to deal with the ramifications of a kiss he thought was to neutralise the score but seems to have affected malfoy rather intensely.
ahhhhhhhhh!!!! i wanna read the next chapter soon!
and as always, dont wait too long the post the next one ;)
alex.
person delia cerrano
schedule April 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow some kiss! Getting a kick out of this story. I would like more interaction please.
person SP777
schedule April 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #13...

You know for a minute I was like how CLUELESS can this man be??? I'm glad Harry
has some wits about him. Now he has to deal with the 'glitch' within a well-made plan. :-)

The horror...
person alexkdp
schedule April 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i was itching all weekend for the new chapter and i woke up just now and i saw it and it has made my day.
excellent use of rita. i liked how draco was very very un-draco like on the inside - the quivering and the arousal.
spectacular ground work laid down for the next chapter. i wonder what will his and draco's conversation woud be like in the aftermath of potter's excellent performance..ahhh.
lovely tough with the skin contact. and so was draco's reactions to them.
and the most brilliant i think was the rehearsal they had in private and then the play-acting in public. gosh. i really really loved that.
i think if potter behaves like this (all in control and powerful like) in private, malfoy wont be able to control himself.
haha now there's a thought.
yours in anticipation,
alex.
person delia cerrano
schedule April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well he's good & for sure set up as a dark lord! Now they will be able to be with each other more I hope since they are official allies...I hope.
person SP777
schedule April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #12...

1. Well, we
person mistalis
schedule April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing chapter. Keep up the great work on this story. I cannot wait to see what is in store for the pair next.
schedule April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow lol... that was awesome :) Powerful Harry just blows Draco away and that's as it should be.
person alexkdp
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oooo the dark lordy has a goal now. looking forward to see him go about reaching it. and oh! malfoy - excitement.
what a heady combination! i'm all excited now.
keep it up
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