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April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
glad that not everyone's blinded by what dumbles is planning. and i liked how things played out with harry and fenrir. one thing with the bear, at first it read fine, then i thought about it and got confused a little - it's modern day, why would they be going after a bear with swords and arrows? if they were muggles, they'd be using guns and possibly arrows, if they were wizards, a few well placed spells would take care of it. Also, I'm sure that there must be some around somwhere still, but I don't know of very many blacksmiths nowadays outside of like rennaisance fairs.
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March 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing! I'm wondering who Julian is. Is he supposed to be Mogonagls son? Or maybe someone more.
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February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ch1- definitely an interesting start, few repetitive typos i saw that you might want to fix, you have "clam" instead of "calm" in almost every instance and "fallow" instead of "follow" not only in this fic but in some of the others of yours i've read also (fallow is to lie dormant, follow is to go after someone)
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February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
really good story so far, love the tension between harry and fenrir too, very nummy ;) and i'm looking forward to seeing how harry fits into the malfoy lifestyle as well as what everyone back at hogwarts is going to think about him being an official malfoy now as well.
couple little things: 1) you have a few repetitive spelling issues "scaring" (to frighten someone) and "scarring" (to leave a scar) and "fallow" (to lie dormant, like a crop) and "follow" (to go after someone/thing). 2)when dori first examined harry, you said harry had no feeling in his genitals, but then he was certainly feeling things when fen went down on him lol, you might just want to have harry muse on why that changed at some point, perhaps because of the change? overall, really good story so far and i'm looking forward to more :)
couple little things: 1) you have a few repetitive spelling issues "scaring" (to frighten someone) and "scarring" (to leave a scar) and "fallow" (to lie dormant, like a crop) and "follow" (to go after someone/thing). 2)when dori first examined harry, you said harry had no feeling in his genitals, but then he was certainly feeling things when fen went down on him lol, you might just want to have harry muse on why that changed at some point, perhaps because of the change? overall, really good story so far and i'm looking forward to more :)
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February 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful
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February 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to see what else is in store. This is a great story.
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February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just started reading this and am already entranced by the world you have created. I love your twist to the classic evil!Dumbledore. Please update soon x
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February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update chapter 10 soon ^_^
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February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story...it is so different and I love a Harry with Ferir. Brilliant story, can't wait for more.
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February 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Harry's a wolf now, can't wait to see what he looks like as a wolf ^_^
Please update chapter 8 soon.
Please update chapter 8 soon.