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April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot so far. :3 Intelligent!Harry is always good advertising, and I like your focus on some of the other girls, actually delving int their characters and not treating them as stereotypes.
Other things I liked:
1) Harry's verbal comebacks with Malfoy
2) Creation of the privacy rune
3) Wizarding World politics
4) Daphne's slang and abbreviations (Griffs and Snakes!)
This has a looot of fun potential. Just make sure to throw in some challenges for him along the way. ^^ Loking forward to more!
Other things I liked:
1) Harry's verbal comebacks with Malfoy
2) Creation of the privacy rune
3) Wizarding World politics
4) Daphne's slang and abbreviations (Griffs and Snakes!)
This has a looot of fun potential. Just make sure to throw in some challenges for him along the way. ^^ Loking forward to more!
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February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
moments before.
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February 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i have a feeling that you going to bash ron, yes he like sport be he far more then that, and he was good student, harry and ron where B students. you could have ron have hermoine and one other girl, and no bashing.
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February 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this first chapter and I look forward to read more!
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February 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This looks very interesting. Hopefully you can update quickly because i really like your premise so far. More friends, cursebreaking, smarter Harry, all ingredients to a good story. Logically, Harry would have had to have some kind of owl ward on him. Fan mail would have been an absolute for him being who he is. Do try not to go too far into Dumbledore bashing though if you go that path. Maybe a little old/forgetful, but definitely not evil or really too manipulative.