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I'm loving this. You've got a great sense of pacing and the dialogue is fairly realistic to the situation. And I love the tension you've got going on between the two of them. I've just read through the first eight chapters and I can't wait to see some more. Excellent work. Keep it up.

great story. Congrats on the baby. I recommend checking out http://www.ssa.gov/oact/babynames/ or if the link doesnt work google social security baby names. It will tell you how popular the name is. Having a lot of people with the same name is kind of annoying.

You are missing a lot of punctuation marks ( a lot of run on sentences ), but you have a wonderful story. I can't wait to read more!

I'm really, really, really enjoying this story except for one thing...I'm having a hard time believing that she would be so "blaise" about that fact he pretty much "raped" her on their wedding night. And I can't believe she hasn't said something about it to him. I mean, I guess I get that he's the big scary Potions Master, but still, to drug her and do her??? I would be beside myself, livid, pissed beyond belief. I'm trying really hard here to not do the "you should have a scene where...." because I HATE it when reveiwers do it to me...but on the off chance you are the kind of writer who doesn't "mind" suggestions. It would be cool to see a scene where she confronts him about that OR just ignore that if you don't like suggestions. I do love the fact that they are growing closer. I would think that there's something very "primal" for a man to see a woman all swollen with HIS baby.

Wow, I don't normally get too into stories that pair Snape with younger characters but I'm really loving this story so far. I love that you've kept the snarky "I am the Bat of the Hogwarts Dungeons" aspect of his character while also giving him a heart. I also love the way you've written the Weasley family and how the interact. This is exactly the sort of interaction I've grown to expect based on the books and the movies. I hope that you can continue to update this story at the pace you have been, it's really good.

Love it!
And Snape cuddles in bed... Hmmmm ;-)

Wow this is really sweet. I can't wait to read more, hopefully soon? ;)

Thankyou for uploading more chapters -please give us many many more!

I really love their relationship :-)
Update soon please ;-)

I kinda love this :) Great work and I love the banter!