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for What Happens Now?

by astartelydianna

person Anonymous
schedule November 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

gutted this was abandoned, loved reading it

person RookSeer82
schedule April 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. I can't wait for another update.
person vicky
schedule August 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
read your story in 2 days!! please upload more =)
person Bonnie
schedule July 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this!
I haven't read a preg H/S story like this and I think its fantastic! I hope you get to writing more soon, but it must be difficult with your baby and all!
Also you're writing is so much better than mine, and I'm sure better than many others! I don't think you have anything to worry about!

I hope you and your baby are well and you get back to writing this story soon!

(Sorry for my abundance of exclamation marks)
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
he fucked her while she was under the dreamless sleep??? WHAT THE FUCK?? that's ALMOST like rape because she didn't know about the potion or the part about the sex!!!! also he should concider that she would want to rememeber her first time but it was sweet of him that he left her a pain relief potion!!!
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't get it why would George be like this with ginny being pregnant since he is married to harry and it knows this??!!!
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
when pregnant you should be careful about having a too warm of a bath as it could harm the baby!!!
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ron loved Hermione so at the wedding before he married Luna he saw Hermione so Ron better not say Hermione name instead of luna's name in the wedding vowels like Ross in friends loved Racheal and then Ross saw Racheal before the wedding so before he saw Emily so in the wedding vowels Ross said Racheal name instead of Emily name!!! anyway Ron better NOT do that to Luna!!! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bToiIihknvs

that heheheheheheheheheheheheheh is SUCH a funny episode of friends, they are all funny!!! I love friends cast except for Phoebe and the woman who plays her, she is NOT funny!!! I cant STAND lisa kudrow she cant act to have her life in anything!!!!
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
what does that mean about wetting the baby's head??
schedule February 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to an update...soon...PLEASE?

Very much enjoying the story.
Want to know about the new house
and I'd love the irony of them having a LOT of house elves by the time they move in

They'll need them for the kids :-)

Also looking forward to the two of them finally admitting their feelings beyond the forced marriage thing.