rate_review Reviews

I started reading this story because your other fanfics are so good and I have to say that you didn't let me down. I can't wait to read more.

I too happen to have a hectic life and two kids to boot. I love writing as well, however, I've found recently that writing several chapters ahead may be beneficial. I always write by the seat of my pants and never fully think things through, so I'm bound to hit a brick wall or two. Also, my muses tend to be as demanding as the high priestess card from the tarot, so I tend to be pulled into too many directions. I understand the difficulty with finding mistakes. I too do not have a beta on my work, and unless you want to check out my Hermione and Draco stories - two complete ones are posted on here, I find reading through a chapter aloud before posting a chapter may assist with locating those errors. I have read plenty of fan fiction and I have to admit that I have not seen anything in your two stories that scream error. Believe me I have read a few fictions where I can tell the individual writing has only studied English and is not a native speaker. At the same time, I can tell when someone seems to have a learning disability that inhibits their writing. I look forward to your new chapter. Hmm...I just thought of something that might be lacking in this story, which I myself tend to lack in my writing. I tend to be a character driven writer, so I sometimes forget about staging a scene. You may be missing a bit of description, but I tend to get bord when there's too much. I think that's why I have so much difficulty with it in my own writing.

I do like what you are doing here. I also like the other one that you are writing regarding the married fiction. Regarding suggestions for this pairing, I would have to suggest Snape's Story and another I think is called Healing Hands. That latter one you might have to look farther back in archive, as it was finished a couple of months ago. However, I must admit that both of these deal with a bit of darker information when it comes to discovering Snape's past and Hermione's there as a healer in both. The former she's a mind healer and in the later she takes the place of madam Pompfrey.

This is great! Thanks for writing! :) I hope there's more to come.

Mmmm. Your Snape is so wonderfully "Snape-ish". I love it. (I don't normally review on this site, because the captcha's annoy me, but I really, really enjoyed this first chapter!)

Very good. Better Percy then Fred, I say. I still can't believe JKR killed Fred. You should have more reveiews on this story then you do, it's very, very good. There are a few grammatical and spelling errors, but I never think that's a big deal if the story is good and the characters are kept, well in character. Your Snape is still simply amazing. still hate these freaking captchas.

Really enjoying this fic so far. I like the way you're letting their relationship develop slowly and naturally. Keep 'em comin'! Gail x

Great story! I always love this kind of plot and you write very well. It feels new and I commend you!