rate_review Reviews

Excellently written. Lots of emotion. Understood Harry's despair over losing Sirius & his need to feel again. Got a bit confused over Harry immediately leaving after giving birth. That was explained later on in Dumbledore's office. Never explained why Severus didn't follow after him with their child. Liked all the scenes. Thankyou.

Loved it except for the breakup for years with no word before or during then coming back & starting over with no conversation or anger? Now get pregnant and it's just great?? But I still love it & the relationship & love they DID have before the hurtful little boy left abruptly..no guts to even do a face to face so Severus could have his say. Snape didn't have any better father than Harry did. Poor Sev got used again. Which it was longer anyway then maybe some of my frustrations would have been worked out!

You know who I feel the most sorry for? Ron and Hermione. Harry didn't even give them 2 minutes to try and explain. The moment he felt Ron might judge him he ran away and didn't give the 6 year friendship a second thought. Talk about selfish. The porn was fun and well written but Harry was a complete prat most of the time. I mean whats up with only choosing the subjects he liked most to continue? I find it extremly hard to believe that Sev would just agree to that. We all have to do shit we don't want to and study stuff we will probably never use but we deal with it and get through it. I enjoyed your porn but I hated your Harry. I found it believable that he left but a bit unbelievable that Sev accepted him back so fast. Taking care of a kid for 8 years is not a walk in the park...

A really wounderful tale. Very Hot very human. Harry is not perfect and also the life. Snape is so good that is unbelived, 8 year of separation and he can accept the return of Harry is too good to be true but also credible if you caunt that he is alone with a child.