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for All Beneath the Full Moon [COMPLETE]

by Onkoona

schedule January 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
brilliant story
person delia cerrano
schedule June 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thoughly enjoyed this story. It would be great if you would do more stories for my favorite Potions master & his husband the hero. Love the details of their personal relationship...so loving & sweet.
person jules3677
schedule April 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story. Liked all the rituals. Great Court scene. Just thinking of all the students going to hospital each day to give Snape some of their magic made my little heart warm. So liked the epilogue. Thankyou.
schedule February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
aww, nice to see the two with a happy ending and that some things just don't change (looks at mione and sev brewing lol). and i loved the "potions elf", i thought that was so cute. nice story, very well done :)
person delia cerrano
schedule February 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It was such a great story and the epilog was very nice but I'm really looking forward to reading about the time from that night to the epilog; where Severus & Harry are falling in love and learning each others ways & how to appreciate them.
schedule February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
so i seems like that mark may be tying them both together and not just sev to harry. and i liked harry standing up to mcgonagal on sev's behalf and her actually coming through to make things right for him. and of course mione's little "oops" that's opened even more doors for sev. hopefully he can begin to see that everybody really does just want him for him and not what he can do for them. keep up teh great work :D
schedule February 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter, is long, complex (and English is not my first language) I had to read it twice to grasp the whole concept of what was involved. I realized that I had fallen short to read the second chapter which provides the point of view of Harry. I congratulate you. It is excellent, and I'll watch for updates. Chapter three is incredible. I think this very aspected in what legal without knowing all the details of lawyer techs. So far there are no consequences of Harry's brand. I'm eager to know when the Court reation to know that Snape has no have tha Dark Lord's brand and discover that the brand from Harry.

schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
nice to see harry's side of things, his doubts and insecurities about hte whole mess. and yeah, can't wait to see the confrontation and the whole "WTF?! you marked me AGAIN!" lmfao keep up the good work :D
person delia cerrano
schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is certainly a very different plot! Very into it and anxious for you to continue. Always love Harry/Snape unless it's TOO angst ridden!
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh wow... please post the rest soon. This story is amazing. I was confused at first because you jump right into the story action and I wasn't sure what was going on and didn't know what the ceremony was that Snape was fighting against but you answered that later in the story. Can't wait for more :)