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Happy to see you updated again and tried to fix the previous chapter too! I love this story and my only fault with it now is the really short chapters plus please find a Beta to help you out.

Hi! I am a new reader of your story and wanted to drop you a note to let you know that I do like this story. I am a big Drarry fan so always enjoy finding new stories featuring my favorite duo. I just wanted to mention that as I was reading along starting with the first chapter, then continuing by clicking the next chapter links, it flowed rather nicely until I reached the latest chapter which then turned out to be an eye sore and rather difficult to read so I didn't enjoy it as much as the previous chapters.

I hope you can fix this problem because I am afraid it will deter others from attempting to read it.

Please go to the Harry Potter archive and scroll down the latest story list until you find this story and then start reading it from the same perspective as your readers so you can see what I am talking about.

Good luck and thanks for sharing this story!

Chapters 1-8: Good story. My favorite kind of Harry story is where someone (or more) is after him and yet no matter what they try his Potter "magical luck" prevents them from getting the better of him. A little angst is all I can do but I'm staying with this story till Cormac and his lover (Ginny's also) makes it too sad because of how they are making Harry look. Albus and Scorpius are just so sweet!!!

Thanks for the update! I am glad you are continuing this story and that you adopted it. I do feel like like you rushed this chapter (8) a bit and hope you don't lose track of what has already happened in the previous chapters. Thanks for letting me know there will be no mpreg too.

Will you be continuing this story! I would love to read more soon. Thanks for sharing. Oh, and will this story feature mpreg? I didn't see it in the story tags so was wondering. I love Harry being the one pregnant not Draco.

AJ,

Congrats! You are now the new author of Fire and Ice.

I want to be sure you got the notes for chapter 8 so please contact me in the forum via pm to let me know.

I wonder, if you intend to continue. It would be appreciated !) :).

I guess the story is still gearing up to get into it. Will be glad when all these threads start to come together.
Meantime...poor Scorpius. Hope Albus gets help for him soon so he will continue to be involved or Grandma will take Scorpius away and that will be that. Ginny! You're done bad girl! Harry probably really just got conned into marrying you
because it was expected & he hated to disappoint Molly...idiot boy...never stands up for what he wants or is right for him.

Ok I am hating the fact that Harry is working with a guy who is part of the whole serial killer story. You do know it's going to drive me nuts waiting for him to get ambushed or something. Evil author you.

I totally loved Hermione slapping the heck out of Ginny though... that was awesome :)

Now the set up is about complete I think & we can get into the story with Harry & Draco interacting to solve the crimes. Maybe the two lovers of the skanky wives are somehow together killing/raping(at least the male) people. Harry obliterated Draco's memory of their 1st night together!! Now how are they going to get together? And how is he going to explain that to Draco at some point. He will feel awfully guilty once they are together!