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by HeavyMist

person Mark's Pet
schedule February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I had to write this semi-review before I even started the chapter.

Your discussion with your alter-ego was priceless *Nearly fell out of my chair laughing*. Listen to your alter-ego, your hubby, and most of all your LOYAL READERS. We LOVE this story!!! It is moving along nicely and we are just on the verge of the good Kinky, Smutty stuff!!!

My alter-ego has this to say - MP "Do not leave us hanging...that is an order". I know, my alter-ego is a little (LOT) demanding when it comes to Voldemort/Hermoine smut. And she HATES stories that get to the good part and then are abandoned. It has happened too many times for her.

So let ME finish reading this chapter and YOU get to writing the next *pleading submissive on the floor begging*.
person Mark's Pet
schedule February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Leave it to Luna to cut through all of Hermione's excuses and the bullshit...to stab at the heart of the matter. The Order needed Hermoine's research ability and to keep Harry under some control.

I love the descriptions of how insidious Molly, Ginny, and Ron were. And also, glad that the older boys could see past their mother's and sibling's crap. I am glad that the traitorous Weasleys got what was coming to them.

Hermoine had her back up, including Lupin. He just had to love her.

OMG, the horcrux quest was a decoy?!?!?!? I did not see that coming *shocked expression*.

You cannot leave us hanging on this cliffie!!!!!! More, Please!

p.s. I LOVE THIS STORY!! OK, are you happy now?
person Tundeboszi
schedule February 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Blaise and Luna nice pair Im very curious. Voldemort is so sexy. Draco be careful dont cross the line
person Karen Lioncourt
schedule February 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Count me in with the Voldemort groupies, lol^^
person Mark's Pet
schedule February 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was A LOT to take in. Hermoine's 'knowledge' cup runneth over.

I did like the sarcastic remarks made by K-I-A. Especially the one about intimate, intercourse and foreplay!!

I wonder who is next on the list for Hermoine to meet? And when is he going to kiss her again?!?!?!?!

More, please!
person Kara
schedule February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This entire society reminds me of Brave New World, so I can't help but wonder what the downside is? Who doesn't this society work for?
More importantly (and on a completely different note
), what exact lies was Dumbledore spreading? Why did everything go down like it did in the 90's? Knowing what's going on in the present is really confusing without a bit more background on what was going on during canon. I know you probably have this all jotted down, but this chapter is a bit frustrating without that knowledge.
person His4Ever
schedule February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First off please don't ever write about how You hope the writing is less.....boring....because I can tell you right now I don't read boring ever!!!!!! There now thatis out of the way...*grinning*....oh yeah got my fix.....poor Hermione surrounded by a bunch of Voldy groupies......I wonder is Hermione going to retreat into herself...distance herself from the survivors friends or not she woke still believing the way of the past. And. Really can't see her just jumping on the All Hail Lord Voldemort train....and I'm really hoping that Draco and Blaise have to really work at gaining her trust and friendship back......oh and that seed that Neville is off to get.....it wouldn't happen to be one of those 51 ...excuse 50 ingredients needed for a certain potion *wicked laugh*....and I'm so hoping since Hermione spouted off the right name that it's an ingredient only used in a couple of potions...man I'd love to see her run or escape hiding a dodging for a while...oh please let her really give Voldemort a run for his money and the others as well.....even though I want to join the Voldemort club...in no way should it be as easy as He thinks it's gong to be.....oh man do I love this story...waiting with bated breath for the next installment......*wink wink*
person Anon
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
feel really stupid, been trying to do reviews and just tried this part...anyway, I am really liking this story, there are parts that actually freak me, but then that is part of this kind of story. will try to review, but I find myself getting into a story and just clicking the next chapter button...on to the next chapter!
person selene
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Anather great chapter keep going please
person Burnedx2
schedule February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Haha I was waiting for Blaise to get punched in the face to stop talking. I'll be interested to see how Hermione reacts to seeing her friends in the next chapter.