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it is a little boring. I love the story but i feel like hermione is to meek and i want her to show voldemort there was a reson she was called "the smartest witch of her age". How she is living now with voldemort isn't better than when she was with the order. i would ike hermione to put up some resistance that would shock voldemort. And i would love some draco basing, he practically saved her just to make her life worse than before

I love Hermione's monologues and arguments with herself and coming to terms with her needs.

Another grate chapter. BRAVO BRAVO

I like the interaction at Hermione and Voldemort It is quite funny.

HM,

No, you have not lost me. I got a flu shot and it with diabetic, kicked my ass *just call me Sleeping Beauty*. I am finally able to function and read without falling asleep or forgetting what I just read.

I just finished chapter 19, the one you posted early...THANK YOU SO MUCH. I am glad that my posting helped. This story is awesome and I can't wait to get caught up.

I loved the scene in the hallway...miss sassy with her hands on her hips 'demanding' answers. But the reaction to Snape was off-the-charts, wickedly funny. Especially with LV getting all hot and bothered by her 'fire and passion'. I would be more than happy to show him both, if he promises to do all those naughty things to me *heavy breathing and profuse sweating*!!

Your discription of the drastic change in Hermoine was brilliant. I could see he change from Hyde down to Jekyll and then down to a mouse. Talk about being beaten down *who*. I am glad that LV 'cares' enough to want to find a way to bring her out of her 'hiding place'.

I hope to catch up tomorrow. So you better have somemore chapters in the wings, ready to post!!!

Excellent chapter! I can't wait for the the memories to start flowing and for Hermione to see and hear with her own ears the traitors. I also love the sexual tension and dizziness that Hermione experiences with Lord V. You're doing fantastic! I check daily for updates and can't wait to see Hermione's deflowerment by our Lord.

HeavyMist, this is one of the most well written Lord Voldemort and Hermione shippings I have ever read. You belong in the Hallowed Grounds along with Nerys, Serp and my other fave authors. The story is so exciting, fast paced and intricate I often forget she has only been awake for three or four days. Im on the edge of my seat waiting for the memories to be revealed so she can bask in betrayal's pain and slowly but surely turn to our Lord for dark pleasure and pain and rise to becone his Dark Lady. Please keep up the good work and finish the story. I really love it and hope with our overzealous praise you even write more fanfictions. Thank you.

Allo..Allo...my Dear...and oh yeah girlfriend listen to your inner k-I-A....and the hubby!!!!!!!..you better keep writing because I'm totally hooked on this story....it's Aaaaaaammmmaaaazzziiinnngg!!! Besides I'm half in love with Voldemort..and well I have always loved Severus..that voice ..oh please whip me..spank me...just don't send me home...lol.....ok...enough of that...serious reviewing needs to happen...down libido down!!!

Poor Hermione with her friends...to wake up and to be hit with information on so many different levels...this girl has moxy....me I'd be hiding under the cover whispering its just a dream.....Jewel..actually covered most of what I was thinking about Chapter 18.....though I resented how some actually were getting mad at her ...they haven't been in a coma and have had a couple of years to adjust...everyone is just expecting her to listen be given the facts and all should be great for her.....I hope they all see her struggle and yes Luna cut through the bull but...everyone always sees and thinks Hermione can handle anything thrown at her....I'm really wanting these people to feel like dirt...and finally see her as a witch whose lost...though never and I mean never broken....cause what doesn't kill you makes you stronger...and if I was Voldemort...yep, Dark Lord Sir...good luck...because I think even he under estimates her....

Ok...ok...*head back laughing*....Lordy Lordy .....Hermione is something....her power is incredible...Severus alive and she is one pissed off witch.....the end broke my heart ..she has such a tender heart is so good and true inside....toes men need to feel like crap....Draco and Blaise redeemed themselves in my eyes...but only a smidgen...they need to beg her to forgive them...gah!!!! But I do love my Slytherins!!!!!

It is hard to face facts when you have been fed lies for half of your life...you have developed Hermione very well so far, so will be hard to convince due to her logically brain. She will have to face all of the lies and deciet she has been presented with and it will be a hard adjustment for her. So many things happening to her in just 3 days since she woke up from her coma...first has to deal with a completely new world, punishment from her "master" and be introduced to a lifestyle she had never considered and now to be told almost all of her previous "best friends" were liars. That is a lot for the brain to process in a short amount of time...i do hope Tom gives her a few days to process and work things out before inflicting more punishments. I understand why he started out handing out punishments, to break her stubborness among other traits, but he needs to be careful or he will break her spirit and then it will all be downhill. Keep up the good writing, it is an enjoyable story.

I am loving this story, I do tend to get so caught up I forget to review. Your writing is amazing and I love how detailed your story is. Can't wait to read more!!