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Another brilliant chapter! How much time do you spend researching this stuff or do you make it up? The detail you put in is incredible, it makes the fic much better than most others I've read. Although, the chapters where Hermione gets punished are still my favourite! ;)

AMAZING!!!! You have surpassed my wildest dreams and fantasies with the twists and turns that this enlightening story has unfolded into. Oh my God, when you started talking about the Immortal Naga Goddess, I was only sitting at the edge of my seat begging for him to be the Chosen. You have weaved a story that puts J.K Rowling's books to shame and makes me wish this was the real reality. I adore the way that Hermione is coming into herself and is blossoming into what she should be: The Chosen One's Queen. The sensuality dripping from these words drive me into a frenzy and keeps me checking for an update on a daily basis. Keep up the fabulous work and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Hermione's alter ego little mind bitch (did that make any sense) has been eerily silent ...

thank you for the explanation I need it. I haven't really read a story like yours before. I continue continue to read your story because I really want to know how it ends

HM,

Very few writers understand the importance of 'dialogue' during foreplay and sex. Those. like yourself; also understand that dirty-talk...especially from the male characters with deep, resonant voices (i.e. LV, Snape, and Lucius) can be an aphrodisic all in itself. Listening to LV was extremly HOT *damp seat...again*. I am going to have to start putting a towel on my chair before I read your chapters!?!?!?!?!

LV was so SEXY and EROTIC with his discriptions and his ministrations were decadent. But the demands for Hermoine to beg were purely DEVILISH and DELECIOUS!! Never leave out his demands for control, they are inherent in his character and make your readers moan with delight.

I could have died a happy reader at the end of the sex. But your eureka moments for Hermoine were well played. Her character has always seemed to have very low self-esteem. I like that LV is the ONE person who apreciated her for her intelligence and let her know.

I can see that he is also going to teach her that her sexual awareness is just as important to her improving self-esteem. GO LV!!!!!

As always...More, Please!!!!

You right Hermione is confused her all word is turn up side down. She is in a strange word like Alice when she falt in tha rabbit hole. And she has affection to Voldemort this is strange and new to her too. Anyway I loved your story I think you are a great writer. And you updateig very offten, please dont change your way. If somebody dosent like this story dont read it. Xxxxx

Just thought I'd say this is one of the best LV/HG stories I've read! I think you've got the dynamics of their relationship just right and I can't wait to see how their relationship develops. Well done and thank you for writing such a magnificent fic!

Finally Hermione see's that she is more than what people have been telling her she is. She has a great support system in place if she is allowed to talk to them more with Draco, Blaise, Luna, Nevelle and the others. I can't wait to see what happens next. This is just the first of many layers to be uncovered for both LV/H.

I have to agree with you, if people find a story not what they were hoping for quit reading it for a few chapters come back to it again and if it still doesn't interest you, let it go. I have done that with other stories. I got really into one story and then i HATED where the author took the characters, I gave it a few more chapters and then I had to quit reading it. When it was complete I went and read the last chapter and I was still unhappy with how it turned out but that is how the author wanted it and it is their story.

Keep up the great writing and I will be interested to see where the characters go next. I would like more dialogue between the them but it is your story.

Poor Hermione she is confused :D. I hope she will not totaly submit to him. I want to spank Voldi's ass :D

HM,

I am all caught up now.

WOW *heavy breathing, sweating and damp chair*!!!! That was AWESOME and soooo HOT! I even liked K-I-A, being on LV's side and having the broom to make Hermoine 'kiss' his boots. That was too funny.

Hermoine is learning that she DOES have power over LV. Especially when he is in her mouth. She is in for some eye-opening revelations when she learns she has him in the palm of her hand.

If you keep writting chapters like this (very discriptive and graphic) and I will need to replace the cushion on my chair. Oh, but what a problem to have!?!?!?!

I can't wait for another chapter...More, Please!!!!!!!