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Heavy Mist may I say I love your devious, sensual, dark and absolute twisted mind that devises these plots and the way it seems to caress my mind with its fluid symmetry and words. I love how Hermione's resistance melted from our Lordship's sinful and seductive lip licking! LL Cool J eat your heart out baby! The soul hard fucking was amazing I felt like I was staring into Voldemort's hypnotic eyes just demanding me to submit. You my dear have alleviated my depression and given me the uplifting happiness with this chapter. The dark manipulations of Albus make me scream to see the pensive of their punishments and I can't wait to hear more about the Weasles. May I beg prettily for more fucking? Hermione restrained by his magic and given so many orgasms that she blacks out and before getting this gift allows herself to beg and prove her need and want to be his sub? I can't wait for the next chapter.

Haha loved Lavender's nickname for Snape. I do enjoy reading about the trio of Slytherins (Lucy, Sev, and Voldie). You've chosen a good mix of characters. Lavender is an interesting choice, but you've included her well. I can't wait for your next update!

Hermione, Hermione. Such a suditty, always jumping to conclusions, overly emotional, even slightly prudish when it comes to sex little know it all! Hermione in this chapter acts like a scandalized virgin who has read porn for the first time. Deeply aroused, but her earlier training by her self imposed restrictions from Hogwarrs make her gasp like a 90 year old cat lady who never had sex or married. Lavender's vaguely detailed attempt at relieving the pain was very clinical and written in a tastefulanner so extreme cusps to you and your fluid writing skills. I wasn't shocked at all that Snapey-Pooh punished her after that nickname and I'm quite happy you put Snapey in a sarcastic but caring situation. Narcissa is the perfect submissive sister to talk to since she has many years and deeper insight to share and her advice was so patient and direct. I love that they are so adamant about Voldemort's interest in Hermione. She definitely needs more punishment with the way she assumes things, it's getting a little irritating since she can grasp a lesson and it slips away so quickly. But now hopefully she can think rationally and have a conversation with Voldemort and explain her side and get more details from him. Thanks for the update and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Sorry I didnt rewiew. I havent had time to read and I just catch your story. I love it what can I say

Great chapter. I can't wait to hear what Lavender with Snape. Hope you manage to fight off the writers block!

OMG!!!! That sizzling claiming kiss made me lose it. Hemione was so wound up at being dismissed and he so easily soothed her ruffled feathers while giving her the psychological boost she needed and also training her with positive and deliciously, dirty, naughty negative reinforcement. Absolutely delicious! But Lavender killed me she's such an annoying character to me and I'm curious about the way you will present her, from what I've read so far she isn't that bad. Too giggly and bubbly for my taste but very in line with her portrayed self. Narcissa was simply perfect! Her poise, sweetness and absolute pleasure at being owned and claimed and the dreamy "I was punished in front of two Masters". She also seems to view Hermione as a daughter for the sweet way ahe cared for Draco and aoon to be sister is submissiveness. Simply brilliant! I also enjoyed the previous chapter it was quite well written also. I must say I'm worried about Hermione's brain she has so many mood swings and zone out moments that it seems that she will burst a blood vessel with her silly tantrums but nevertheless she is interesting. And giving Ms.KIA such a long and dangerous cane, quite arousing and dirty! I cant wait for the next chapters!

Finished all of the current chapters. This is a great story. I hope you continue it and post more soon. Thank you for sharing!

Please continue writing. Your story is addicting and I have really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for writing.

You are awesome! I have cannot stop reading your chapters. Hermione's internal monologue is sooo funny! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!! I cannot wait to see what happens next! LV seems sooo hot! I love the LV-HG pair!

Im in tears! That Pureblooded Pekinese bitch Narcissa! I loved this chapter its simply delicious chocolate covered passion fruit! LV is being so malciously cruel yet in doing so is showing her how she ticks. She had a breakthrough that was quiet but broke her sound barrier: she's a masochistic little bookworm and he's the one who can give her what she wants and needs. Oh Snape, Snape, my juicy grape. That's beyond funny I wonder if she will get a taste of LV's jealousy when Lavender regales Hermione with orgasm enducing Tales of Deviance by Prof. Snape! I love it! Your work is as arousing and causing me to beg for more. Please for my sake?