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You sexual goddess! This chapter instantly made me lose my already lose morally ambiguous mind! The correct thoughts and know how that sex does actually hurt the first time and is no where near the flowery mess that most people write was simply scientifically perfect. Now Voldemort calling his previous pet baby and said he loved her?! I melted and became a boneless mass who lost her breath and saw the cosmos bloom in front of my eyes. This was such a sensual, fucking filthy chapter I believe Hermione needs to marry him immediately and not to mention go cut those floppy tits off that rude waitress. I can't wait for more chapters, I'm too high from your wonderful prose to write a decent review. My apologies but it was so amazing!

Anather great chapter. I LOVE IT

wow, i love this fic! It's the first time i read the whole story written 'the right way' and i also love the way you built the relationship between voldy and hermione.... The perfect D/s couple (together with sev/herm)... I hope I could read about another session and some more smut... You write very well both *wink*compliments again
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My sweet slave! You are fantastic. I love this chapter the loose ends are tied up and I'm ready for dirty sex between Voldemort and Hermione. I'm shocked she could even follow the conversation as aroused and JEALOUS she is. Saggy mammory glands my left booty cheek! I'm shocked her waspish tongue didn't run away with her and cause Voldemort to spank her in public and cause her to orgasm in front of everyone. I can't wait until he proclaims her his Supreme Queen to the whole world. I want very dirty dominating sex and I can definitely tell it will be since he dragged her from the table. She was trembling in need I could feel it through the screen and is so desperately on the edge to orgasm it's amazing no one has noticed. Or maybe they just don't want to risk his displeasure. Anyways, I'm anxiously waiting for her Acceptance! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Yay for another great chapter. Your idea is a very interesting take on the original plot. Turning everything around to make Dumbledore out to be the bad guy. You support it wonderfully. Dumbledore always seemed like he could be a villain if given the chance. He definitely made some questionable choices at times.
I also like the flirting going on. Sexy! Looking forward to more!

Caught up on the last few chapters. Enjoying your story very much. Very interesting take on the whole storyline, particularly the machinations of Dumbledore. And very intriguing that Snape is in a relationship of any kind with Lavender of all people. Glad to see though that Hermione has some women to help her better understand her new found situation. Thanks for continuing!

I like the idea, but it's kind of awkward in the reading. Almost every sentence is a run-on sentence, and it's very, very difficult to read a paragraph and understand it the first time through.

Hey! I visted this story a few days ago, and I just want to say Hermione/Tom Riddle is my favourite ship, right after dramione :D Considering english isn't your first lang, there are a lot of words used here that even I don't know! It's written well and I'm excited to read more.

Tease! This chapter was clearly angled at all those dramione fans out there. They were almost having a civil conversation, which was really weird, but I'm digging it and loving the insightful Malfoy. I noticed your story needs a bit of betaing in terms of putting punctuation in the appropriate place. I think you even capitalised in the middle of a sentence, several times too, and it wasn't even a noun you were capitalising!

Gee. I'm stoked :D

This fic is perfect! Amazing! But I tough Hermione would be mad about the magical cores, she would be almost insane to read a book about it. Even more now that they did what they did in front of everybody. If I were her, I would be crazy to go to library... Hogwarts library would have a book about it? If I remember well, Hermione said she had already read something about it... Please, don't take to long to update. Kisses.