rate_review Reviews

I'm so sorry to hear of your loss. My thoughts are with you in this tough time. This has been an amazing story. Thank You for taking the time to let us all read it.

Your story is AMAZING!!!!! I just spent my whole weekend reading chapter after chapter, completely unable to stop. Your characters are mesmerizing and your ideas are so unbeliebably unique! I loved your Voldemort and your Hermione is just perfect! Even if you decide to leave it like this it's still perfect. I just wanted to let you know just how much fun it was for me to read your story.

I know these words may sound empty from a total stranger (and it's not like they could ever sooth an unsoothable ache), but I'm so incredibly sorry for your loss!

First of all, I'm really sorry about your mother and I hope that you'll be ok.

So, I've been reading this story for awhile and I absolutely love it and I'm really sorry that you haven't heard from me before, I most definitely am absolutely horrible at reviewing and should do it more often, not when it's practically too late.

But better late than never, right?

I love this story, I started reading it when it first popped up. To be honest, I didn't like it too much at first with all the information and stuff (don't get me wrong, I really liked that aspect too), I felt like I had to wait for the actual story to unfold. When it did, I fell in love. I find your story to be funny, intelligent, sexy and romantic and I am amazed at what you can do and how you can make things come to life.

I hate that you are going to stop the story at this point, but I completely understand your reasoning.

I only hope that you will one day decide that this story is indeed forth completely finishing and that you can find it to forgive an avid reader, who finds reviewing one of the most terrifying things to do.

Much love,

Lunalyne

I'm sorry to hear about your mother. You do what you need to. For what it's worth, I quite enjoyed your story. The smut was wonderful :) If we're lucky maybe we'll see you again.

I'm very sorry for your loss! I'm also sorry that this is my first review even though I've read your fic from the beginning.

I am generally a bad reviewer, partially because I usually stick to completed fics, but mainly because I don't take advantage of the anonymity that the Internet offers. Since I've only ever admitted to a couple people that I read fanfic, I tend to continue that secrecy and "closet reading" when it comes to reviewing as well. Adding to that the genre of this fic is a bit more on the taboo side and I tend to hide even deeper in the closet. None of that is a good excuse when considering your message to the readers, but i imagine I'm not the only reader that "hides" from reviewing. You are right of course...what motivation do writers here have if they don't get any feedback? It should be obvious, but your message should probably be posted in bold at the beginning of every fic.

Now for the actual review I have thoroughly enjoyed your story! I usually stick to Dramione, but my "dark" side loves stories with an initially reluctant slave and master theme (most that I've read have been original fiction though), so I've read the occasional non-Dramione that appear to fit that mold. Of that style, yours will definitely be remembered among the best I've ever read. At times it felt too descriptive but not to the detriment of the overall flow. You did a great job of twisting the canon plot and I actually believed that LV was in the right. You did so well that I actually looked at Dumbledore a bit differently when watching a few of the movies in the past months. You also did one of my favorite things in making Ron a villain...hate hate hate Ron. I might have liked it better with Draco as the hero, but even though I usually see LV as evil, you had me liking him in the end.

As the story progressed I had invisioned it going long past the stage of Hermione's acceptance and their marriage. I figured we would see the many ways that they would grow after their bonding. LV had already made huge social, economical, political, and other changes, but I got the feeling that even he expected great things from Hermione once she stood at his side. I'm not sure if the story arc was consistent with your original plans, but I hope it didn't get cut back because of those of us that failed to review. If it did then that would be even more of a reason for us all to review because it is a big loss to the community to lose out on quality writing.

Again, I'm sorry if I helped contribute to your frustration with lack of reviews. Based on the hits I'm sure you had lots of silent fans. I hope you won't be discouraged to write more in the future. Please accept my condolences for your loss and I hope for all the best for you and your family.

Hello Darling! Wonderfull chapter I love your story I dont forget you. Keep going Xxxx

Beautiful! I'm sorry I didnt review the other day my darling author but I loved both chapters. The mesmerizing detail that went into discribing the beautiful art of rope binding is simply craveable. I enjoyed the previous chapter also and I can see how on this chapter Hermione would be overtaken by being immortal along side her dominate mate. I'm so sad that this story is ending and I can't wait for more of your brilliant writing to grace this delicious site. I'm sorry that we didnt get the wedding scene since Im sure Voldemort did something dirty to his bride to be. Breathlessly awaiting the next chapters.

It is a wonderful story I hope you write a new one

My darling love! This chapter was AMAZING! The showing of his real face with such exquisite detail and reverence of his "hot and sexiness" is mind blowing. The twisted machications of the mind of Lord Voldemort is better than any psychologist. Facing your greatest nightmare and willing surrendering to them would be greater than seeing a beautiful face and falling into deep lust but never true love wouldnt satisfy anything for either of them. she realizes even more in this chapter: Tom Riddle is playing for keeps. This simple yet complex entwining of the past, present and future is mind boggling and incrinate.He was absolutely right but I'm going to miss those red glowing eyes shimmering or burning with red hit lust. The silky timbre of his voice calling her name, explaining how much in so few words he needs and must have her undivided love and submission. Then he seamlessly and shamelessly tells her pick out a wedding gown love, don't worry about anything Narcissa has you covered! Well what a way to tell someone your getting married! I can't wait for the next chapter and to see Hermione's dazed reaction. Throw in some sassiness and make him fuck her until she agrees since she's blinded by his potent mix of pain and pleasure.

Skippedy doo dahinnnn...into the review room!!!!!!.....hey hey HM...betcha thought I forgot about you....no sir-reeeee....still here...just real life busy and crazy!!!!!! Dances over to you typing away......gives you and that proof reading hubby of yours two hip checks...lol........


Annnnnndddd now for the serious down low ..*w*....I have loved this story from the get go......I just knew the sexiest Dom/Master in the universe was back to His original sexy self......though like Hermione I feel head over heels in lust/love with His snaky version.....about dies as Hermione started her freak attack in bed ..thinking she was with a stranger....
My heart is a bleeding to think this story is wrapping up....I'm still waiting for this happy slave potion...hmmmmmmm....how in the world is He going to get her to drink it...I can't see Him asking her too and even if He tells her I see one big punishment on the way for her...because I mean heck she already love Him in either form......

Alright I wait as always with bated breath and towels galore....