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January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Its been awhile since i read a good submissive/dominate fic &this one iis shaping up to be awesome! Can't wait till the next chapter is posted!
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January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
My many thanks for posting this chapter earlier than planned, just for me *yippy*.
I did enjoy this chapter. I LOVE the internal dialogue that Hermoine has; it is hysterical.
And LV is just so 'wicked' *shivering*. I especially liked his comment on 'not making love' and the 'hard' comment just pushed me over the edge.
LV has Hermoine as putty in his hands when he provides her with knowledge. She has no choice but to fall for him. Knowledge is her (and his) drug of choice.
Your visual discriptions are very detailed. They are not too cumbersume, but help the story along.
Now, I can't wait until the next chapter. Especially when LV tells Hermoine what her 'duties' are!?!?!?!
Wow, that was the longest review I have ever written.
I did enjoy this chapter. I LOVE the internal dialogue that Hermoine has; it is hysterical.
And LV is just so 'wicked' *shivering*. I especially liked his comment on 'not making love' and the 'hard' comment just pushed me over the edge.
LV has Hermoine as putty in his hands when he provides her with knowledge. She has no choice but to fall for him. Knowledge is her (and his) drug of choice.
Your visual discriptions are very detailed. They are not too cumbersume, but help the story along.
Now, I can't wait until the next chapter. Especially when LV tells Hermoine what her 'duties' are!?!?!?!
Wow, that was the longest review I have ever written.
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January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just finished chapters 1-6 and all I have to say is...WOW, how HOT!!!!
I always love Hermione and Volemort, because there can only be one way for these stories to be. LV as a VERY dominate male and HG as a woman who learns her submission. And that fact that you have already set up the Master/slave aspect. I am chomping at the bit to read more.
I have found a new author to devoure. So...More, Please!?!?!?!
I always love Hermione and Volemort, because there can only be one way for these stories to be. LV as a VERY dominate male and HG as a woman who learns her submission. And that fact that you have already set up the Master/slave aspect. I am chomping at the bit to read more.
I have found a new author to devoure. So...More, Please!?!?!?!
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January 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What is going on with this story?
I go to read a new chapter 5 and noticed that all your reviews are gone and so are chapter 3 and 4!
I didn't think this story needed a rewrite but if that's what you are doing you should let your readers know.
Please update chapter 5 soon!
I go to read a new chapter 5 and noticed that all your reviews are gone and so are chapter 3 and 4!
I didn't think this story needed a rewrite but if that's what you are doing you should let your readers know.
Please update chapter 5 soon!