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February 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Now this chapter was great...loved seeing the interaction between the different men and can't wait to see what they will all mean to Hermione in the future...this was a great chapter to build from and while the previous chapter was disturbing, it was necessary to make things begin to come together...great job
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February 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi This is a great story dont give up please.
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February 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lot of people like your story they are lazy that is why they dont review. Please dont give up I love it
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February 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
YES, a very DARK, Dark Lord. I knew you had it in you *happy dance*.
I just knew he was going to make Hermoine, clean up EVERYTHING. Quite an eye opener for Hermoine and not a peep from K-I-A. Hermoine's reality is sinking in.
The Dark Lord's use of Ginny's degredation was very effective...very well written too *shivers*.
At least Hermoine understood her 'slave' status enough to move away from LV before she was sick. The training is already starting to work.
OMG, I did not see LV becoming worried about Hermoine passing out. Calling for a healer too!?!?!?! Utterly shocked! What does this mean for their relationship?
I await with bated breath.
I just knew he was going to make Hermoine, clean up EVERYTHING. Quite an eye opener for Hermoine and not a peep from K-I-A. Hermoine's reality is sinking in.
The Dark Lord's use of Ginny's degredation was very effective...very well written too *shivers*.
At least Hermoine understood her 'slave' status enough to move away from LV before she was sick. The training is already starting to work.
OMG, I did not see LV becoming worried about Hermoine passing out. Calling for a healer too!?!?!?! Utterly shocked! What does this mean for their relationship?
I await with bated breath.
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February 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I tough she would beg for Ginny. But I can understand her shock. Its really nice the scare she gaves Voldy. Lets see what hes gonna do now. Kisses.
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February 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Honestly i'm not sure if I enjoy reading this story or not but I continue to do so when you post a new chapter so I must like it to some degree. There were a few chapters that were dry but filler chapters have to be there to build the back story and to understand what and why something is happening. I do enjoy the chapters where they are interacting together and this chapter was one of my favorites so far. Keep writing because your story is being read and I think most people are just wondering where it is going. This seems like it will be a long story and a lot of stories with lots of chapters take a good 10 chapters to get off the ground, as this one has but the past 2 chapters I have enjoyed.
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February 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dont worry about not getting reviews but if you are getting hits on each update that does mean that there are people reading your story. You are a great writer and i love seeing updates when i come on cant wait till the next update!
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February 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is really good:) I confess I skimmed through some parts. Mostly, when Hermione is having one of her inner monologues or when Lord V gets into preaching mode. I've thoroughly enjoyed the rest though. Hermione and Voldemort are so wicked together:) You've got me hooked - will definitely be looking for more of this pairing.
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February 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I nearly choked, when I saw the title for chapter 12!!!!
I loved the K-I-A hiding under the cauldron stating that it 'was' as snake in there *evil sniker*.
Finally, Hermoine has realized that she DOES have some power. But her reaction to his last command was PRICELESS!!!!!
I can't wait to see wha the Dark Lord has in-store for her next!?!?!?!?!? She MUST clean everything up...of course. But will she be able to choke out the 'thank you'? We will just have to wait and see.
More, Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I loved the K-I-A hiding under the cauldron stating that it 'was' as snake in there *evil sniker*.
Finally, Hermoine has realized that she DOES have some power. But her reaction to his last command was PRICELESS!!!!!
I can't wait to see wha the Dark Lord has in-store for her next!?!?!?!?!? She MUST clean everything up...of course. But will she be able to choke out the 'thank you'? We will just have to wait and see.
More, Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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February 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Im not reviewing cause im reading in a phone and its realy hard to do it. But im liking it. A lot. Please, dont stop posting. Kisses.