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This is the first time I've ever left a review and while I'm only on Chapter 18, I love what I've read so far and am looking forward to reading the future chapters.

 I love how Voldemort is acting towards Hermione I see so much potential and hope as I read on it shines through.  He's Voldemort written perfectly!

 

I appreciate how you make sure to not involve rape in your story, the victim joining in on the pleasure is one thing but plain RAPE is disgusting and I find very immoral.

 

let the reading continue.

This is the first time I've ever left a review and while I'm only on Chapter 18, I love what I've read so far and am looking forward to reading the future chapters.

 I love how Voldemort is acting towards Hermione I see so much potential and hope as I read on it shines through.  He's Voldemort written perfectly!

 

I appreciate how you make sure to not involve rape in your story, the victim joining in on the pleasure is one thing but plain RAPE is disgusting and I find very immoral.

 

let the reading continue.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story i cant brlieve its over but it was brilliant

Just a small note to say even though this story is done and dusted... only because it's something that's rather jarring to a British reader - British (and European men for that matter) are not circumcised. Whilst it's routine in the US, it's seen as barbaric and unnecessary in Europe (and as such the NHS won't even perform it on Jewish or Muslim babies). Otherwise this is a well written foray into a rare pairing.

I spent the entirety of today reading this story. I fell in love with it early on, and didn't look back. I wanted to wait until the end to review, and I was so devastated to read about your mother's passing. I wish you all the strength in the world, my love. You are a gifted with a beautiful mind and a way with words. Please consider writing again in the future. For now, know that you have a community of people who are inspired by you and who wish you the best. Take care.

My well wishes go out to you and yours. Don't worry about the story. It's a story. You lost your mother and, as such, have bigger things to deal with than fanfiction. Take care.

Wow. Just wanted to say what an amazing story. Incredibly well written, brilliant plot line and some fabulous twists. You are a very talented writer.
Thank you for such a great story.

I am so sorry forum loss. Stay strong, xxxxx

Hi love I'm sorry I haven't reviewed and I'm ending my very deepest and sincere condolences on your poor departed Mother's passing. I know how hard it is to lose a family member. I haven't reviewed the last chapter due to my uncle's inoperable liver cancer and making plans for my family. It doesn't compare to your pain but I understand. I have loved and enjoyed this story to the very end. You have such an erotic, technical, dynamically fluid style of writing that makes my dirty mind sing. As for the last chapter it was lovely and interesting to see a slice of life for Voldemort and Hermione. There will always be some type of slutty and desperate female who will drool over his dark good looks. Also the mention of subspace was simply beautiful and I envy Hermione. I truly hope you come back one day and continue to write in this delicious dark kind of love known as Voldemort and Hermione. I wish you fortitude and strength during this trying time. Many hugs and affection my darling author.

I am sorry to hear about your mother. Take care of yourself and know that there are always people saying a prayer for you.

I have enjoyed this story from the beginning and enjoyed your idea but did feel myself waining in reading. Here is my main reason for this; I didn't think the characters spoke enough to one another, they reflected into their own minds about situations but not enough conversation between them. It is your story and if that is how you want to write you did a great job of writing it but I like more interaction between the characters when I read. I felt that there should have been a chapter where they talked with one another about what he expected from her with their relationship, she needed to be able to talk to him and i never got that she really could. I did get the feeling he loved her and cherished her above all others but I feel like they needed to talk more and relect less on what she was feeling.

Overall I did enjoy this story and I know I rambled above and I hate to say anything negative to writers when I know they are doing this as their hobby and for their own enjoyment. It was a well thought out story that was extremely complex.

I'm terribly sorry to hear about your loss! My thoughts and prayers are with your family.
I'm also very sorry I've not reviewed before. I've been enjoying this story quite a bit, but it seems as if every time I sit down to read a chapter, something else comes up and it ends up slipping my mind. It's no excuse, but I wanted you to know that your work was appreciated.