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for The Mirror of Erised

by tbird1965

person wick
schedule January 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
....wowza....
person Cat
schedule January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
McClaggen??? please say its not at tattoo on her. It's so weird reading that Sev is so inexperienced can't wait to see how you spin this.
person Mellana
schedule January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
McClaggen?? What??
schedule January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you stopped it there! What an evil cliffie! More soon please. Like, in the next 30 minutes would be great! Lol!
person Lauren_W
schedule January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is incredible. I always love a virgin Snape ;)
person Missycam
schedule January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Huh... What!? You end the chapter here!?
More, please! ;-P and thank you ;-)
person eri
schedule January 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. i love where its going full of smutty smut smut!!!
person Missycam
schedule January 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the blowjob! ;-P
Update soon please ;-)
person Missycam
schedule January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh Fuck! The last few lines.... WOW!
Please tell me you'll update soon!? ;-P

Oh and Thanks for the chapter! ;-)
person IheartsnapeLoving
schedule January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like where this story is going... Please continue. You left us hanging on such a good spot ;)