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by goldhorse

schedule May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First off, I believe you just broke 400 reviews, nice job O.O Second, great chapter! Evil cliffy though but it was expected. Honestly, I am surprised Sev didn't go with them. I mean, knowing that something could happen due to Lucy and his daughter going with them...just seems odd for him. Can't wait to read more!
person anaidra
schedule May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Whoa...great ending of the chapter (55). Please more.
Btw, I loved the shirts ;). Woudn't mind to have one :D.
person DB1
schedule May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@55 how cruel to leave it there!! Update update!!

DB
person Kimbovet
schedule May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
DUN DUN DUN!!! I so hope Lucius & the creepy healer get the beatdown of their lives & Snape shows up to help do it. BTW, loved the t-shirts!
person Boocat
schedule May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I know people are probably expecting a large confrontation where Draco saves the day, but I kinda Hermione's pregnancy powers kick in and she annihilates them all! I want Lucius, Emmanuel and the followers to HURT! Thank you, HG4eva
person anaidra
schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job on the chap. 54. It's great that the truth is out and I loved what Draco and Hermione told Pansy and basically everyone there.
Look forward to reading more *sigh* even though it means this one will end soon too. Then again, it might mean there will be a new story :D.
schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks again for another great chapter. I'm looking forward to reading the next one.
person Kimbovet
schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well done! The 1st skirmish of the war has begun. It would be so ironic if Pansy ended up with a muggle born or, better yet, a muggle as a soul mate. :-)
schedule May 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aww!!! I'll be so sad to see this one go, but you've gotta do what you've gotta do.... If it helps you write the other two, the best we can do is support you, right? And... on that note... FUCKING AMAZING CHAPTER!!!!!! So glad they're out now, but I can't help but worry about Hermione.... If anything happened to her, it would just devastate Draco.... :(