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for Locked In

by goldhorse

schedule May 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Thanks.
person DB1
schedule May 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@56 omg!!! Omg!!! The suspense. Update!!

DB
schedule May 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, alright! That's the way to win a fight. lol Sorry Hogsmeade had to suffer a bit, and that other good people might have been hurt in the fight, but I am glad they have the assholes! I know Naomi and Severus will be fine, but how sweet to jump in front of the curses like that. Love it and can't wait to see Lucius and Emmanuel punished! Thank you! HG4eva
schedule May 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
HA! Nice XD I forgot they could do wandless and they were supposed to keep it hidden. If the aurors and everyone else knows what is good for them, they will pretend they never saw it XD Great chapter hun, can't wait to read more!
person Kimbovet
schedule May 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! The bastards finally got what was coming to them! I expect the aurors will be obliviated of this memory. More soon, please.
schedule May 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WHY?! WHY?! EVERY TIME, YOU LEAVE US ON A CLIFF HANGER!!!! I'm a masochist, though, so you know I love it. lol :D That at least answers the question about where the damn healer went.... It's actually a little advantageous that they met this way.... I mean, yes, they are probably outnumbered, but they are the most brilliant batch of war heroes in the world. And Lucius is a damned coward, once you get right down to it. It's also better to get the damn thing over with. If they waited too long, the whole affair would've probably lost its steam....
person C.G
schedule May 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh no. What is going to happen next? Will they get captur or will Snape save them? Please update soon.
schedule May 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ugh... Damn cliffhanger. I love it. Please post more soon.
person margiere
schedule May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holy Cow Women! What a way to end a chapter. It seems Draco was right to be very concerned. Much Love to The Room and the Castle. It's amazing just what the Hogwarts can do when motivated to protect.

It is frightening to think about what Lucius and Emmanuel are capable. I do hope Draco's dreams were a warning and not prophetic. I'm so hoping Snape shows up to kick Lucius ass. If anyone deserves to put Lucius down it would be either Draco or Snape. Please update so, I've just got to know what happens next.
person Anon
schedule May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
you truly are evil! hopefully you'll post soon so we can see how this plays out!