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for Locked In

by goldhorse

schedule May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aw, what a sweet chapter. I love the image of the little baby sucking its thumb before its even born. I hope the meeting with Cissa goes well. Can't wait to read more.
schedule May 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have to say.. I read a few chapters of this.. and had to re read them and then decided to read the full story. I like the thought of Snape being a vampire.. and.. we all know that he could have been Harry's father. I hipe to read much mofe form this story!!
person Christopher
schedule May 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, but the Unspeakables are being pricks here and I REALLY hope that Harry says no to them and helps to take them down. What they are doing is nothing more than blackmail that the Unspeakables should be EXECUTED for doing, period and done with, argument finished forever.
person Boocat
schedule May 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
God! I love your work. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person bre95
schedule May 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH. That is my only thought. wow that was a chapter. :)
person Kimbovet
schedule May 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well that helps make more sense of things. I will be sad to see this story end, too.
person white dragon
schedule May 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
thank you so much for such a great story. i always get excited to see it updated and now that i've finished my undergrad coursework, this was a great way to cap off my day. please continue writing stories, they always make my day.
schedule May 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well that was one heck of a twist that I wasn't expecting! Though I always wondered how they could just take people off and experiment on them. Great chapter! I can't wait to read the last two, yet at the same time, I dont wanna! lol.
schedule May 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I didn't see that coming, but I like the idea of it. They get to live their lives and save people in the background. Tiring, but otherwise sounds great! I know they like to have a choice to say yes or no, but minus that one choice, I don't see the problem. lol Thanks!! HG4eva
person Trelweny
schedule May 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh good. I about had conniptions thinking Severus and his mate died taking their killing curses.
Unspeakables... really? Hm... except for all the double duty it really sounds like a win-win situation. Especially on the "protect their daughter" front.

Whyfor does the Auror have no name?

Thanks for writing.