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for Locked In

by goldhorse

person hannahs
schedule January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this chapter's really captured my interest in this story and I really look forward to reading more!
schedule January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OOH! IT'S GETTING GOOD! Your whims are better than my carefully laid plans, so write away! I eagerly await the next one. :D
schedule January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this tale and look forward to more. I am looking forward to finding out how they're stuck in there, why no one has come, and why the room only provides certain things. Thanks! HG4eva
schedule January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that castle is fucking cold. We're going to see cuddling now, right? *wink wink* Maybe the Room of Requirement refuses to repair itself until it's two favorite people are repaired....? Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
person Cat
schedule January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Goodness Malfoy does have a heart. My question tho, if she can get a patronus out and feel that it was received why did they not send one back if they are truly trying to get them out? Post soon!
schedule January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Made me chuckle, keep it coming ^_^
schedule January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh geeze, I completely forgot about the need to go lol. It seems to me as if the room responds when they work together. Sneaky sneaky room. Glad you are going to write about Sev, I can wait 10 chapters if I have to lol. I have to wonder, if Draco shares his cloak with her if the room will give them something else like a bed or at least a couch. Can't wait to read more!
person Sapphire Phoenix
schedule January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like the premise....the Fates taking things in hand again, huh? Shoving them together in a survival situation. I cannot wait to see how this progresses.
person Cat
schedule January 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I vote for adding why he looks sad. Why do I have a feeling that even tho she can get a magical message out noone will be able to open the door? Tho food is still an issue....keep it up!
person Kimbovet
schedule January 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's an interesting start. I'm looking forward to more. Will we learn more about vampire Snape?