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by goldhorse

schedule February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
YES! We've had a moment! Progress! :D And, just for the record, a chapter ending in a description of Draco Malfoy's naked body isn't slow. A torturous cliff-hanger, but not slow. ;)
schedule February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think they both needed that moment in more ways then they realize. It's another step towards accepting each other and themselves. That room is scary good..who needs a councler? Just go to the ROR XD
person Kimbovet
schedule February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Definitely hot in there! Well I see where this is going & look forward to enjoying your future updates.
schedule February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Since I am sure we all want you to heal as quickly as possible, here's a review for you. :-) THANK YOU!!! I laughed out loud when her clothes disappeared. That was brilliant! I know it was a touching chapter that moved them closer to having feelings other than hatred for one another, but their abject disbelief and horror at having to be naked with one another cracked me up. I look forward to loads more really soon. Feel better, HG4eva
person Kimbovet
schedule February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Evil!!! Please post the next chappie soon. Pretty please. *blinks eyes rapidly*
person Annie
schedule February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Its really starting to get good. Please post the next chapter soon.
schedule February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Why'd you stop there?! It was getting to the good part!!!! :D (You do realize you've created monsters out of us, right? lol)
schedule February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am really glad they made it through, despite how horrid she must have felt and been. Draco was a champ! And, to offer her the bath first was sweet. I love that she can see through his BS when he tries to "manly" and that he is starting to see all the great things about her. This bath should prove very interesting. lol Thanks and feel better!! HG4eva
person Anon
schedule February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOO dont just end it there!!! come back! write more!!
person anaidra
schedule February 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... :D...cant wait fot the next chapter. It could be really interesting and fun!