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for Locked In

by goldhorse

schedule February 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Goodness, well didn't they have a fun time. Come on Dray! Fight for what you want, it's time you stop letting your dad control everything. Can't wait to read more hun.
schedule February 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
He stayed?! Wow. These two have NO CLUE how much their lives have changed. lol And, I look forward to their friends, Dumbledore, Snape, and the castle itself, continuing to manipulate them. Lovely chapter!! Thank you, HG4eva
person Annie
schedule February 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your stories going great. I'm kind of disappointed that they are going to be able to leave the room, but that is only because they are getting along so well now and I don't want that to end. I can't wait for your next chapter. My fingers are crossed, please let this story have a happy ending.
schedule February 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*GASP!* Draco! I'm sorely disappointed in you! You should have more stamina! :D Glad you're feeling better. :)
person anaidra
schedule February 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really great. Want to read more and more!!!
schedule February 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was interesting lol. I find it rather plausible though after all, as you pointed out, they are hormonal teens. Great chapter, can't wait to read more. I have to wonder if the room will take things away if they start fighting again.
person Kimbovet
schedule February 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Glad you're feeling better. That was hot & Hermione's such a dirty girl! Can't wait for more.
schedule February 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I assure you, it made perfect sense. lol I don't know if I would snap that quickly for him, but I would have for his daddy (as played by Jason Isaacs) days sooner! ;-) Thanks for a lovely update, my dear! HG4eva
person Anon
schedule February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh thank you for the quick update!!! :))) another one soon pleaseeee! i CANNOT wait to see what happens with them!
person Annie
schedule February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome :) More please.