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for Locked In

by goldhorse

person anaidra
schedule February 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am so glad they cant leave the room yet. Cant wait to see more. Please keep going.
person Maddy
schedule February 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Godric!!!!! I just spent all morning reading this story. It is amazing! I love the characters and the whole plot and oh my Slytherin!!!! ILOVETHESMUT!!!!!!!!!!!
person Snowe
schedule February 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm. I wonder if they can't get out yet bc they really don't want to right now. Interesting.

You should post this at dramione.org too!
person Kimbovet
schedule February 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nothing wrong with pure smut :-). Glad Draco decided to stay the night. It'll be interesting to see how everyone reacts to them when they leave thr RoR.
person Margiere
schedule February 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Whew..that was incredibly hot. Draco is in a tight position but I would have thought he would be through with others dictating his life. I'm surprised by the room. Their stay can't be over already can it? This story is beyond fascinating. Thank you for the new chapter.
schedule February 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You go, girl!! I did not see that coming. lol Brilliant. I guess they ticked off the room by saying the wrong thing when they claimed it couldn't last. ha ha ha I look forward to LOADS more! Thank you, HG4eva
person DragonGoddess
schedule February 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh it is so obvious the room is making them have to realize their love for each other...It was damaged in an act of hate and only an act of true love will heal it...now if only those two students could realize that ;)
person Citten
schedule February 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh honey i will gladly be 'locked' in as long as you want i am loving this story!!! :) I cant wait to see where you are going to go next and maybe we can have lots more and soon!! :)

ps why are we still having problems loging in, is there something wrong with the system? (not that you run and thing like that but maybe you might know someone who does cause i am getting really annoyed that i cant seem to write my reveiw properly) thanks for listening :)

pps cant wait to see what happens next chapter! :)
person Margiere
schedule February 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You are an absolute Evil Genius(brilliant smile). It was disappointing to think that the room could have been done with them that easily. And after that morning show I can't wait to see what you have in store next. Those two can help each other so much and maybe they can help the ROR heal too. I love where you are going with the story.
schedule February 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm guessing, by the distinct "Preg" warning (AND the fact that we heard nothing of contraceptive spells), that they've DEFINITELY not seen the last of each other. But still, the way you ended that chapter, that minute feeling of fear that it will be over does still take my breath away. The story just got so damn good! Sorry you had a horrible day.... Someone as awesome as you doesn't deserve horrible days.... :(