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by goldhorse

person Rolling14reader
schedule February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG don't do this to me!!! You cliffhanger crazy person! I've been roped into this series for the past few weeks and checking this site like daily to make sure you updated. STOP IT! GIVE ME SATISFACTION!!


To be fair you're an excellent writer and doing an excellent job.
person Jordan
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
1 loving this story, 2 the smut is well written thank you, 3 do they have to show some PDA to get out.?
person DB1
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@20 lol Draco has the room figured out. Great chapter can't wait for the next one.

DB
person Jordan
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This cant be the end :'( i want more now!
person Kimbovet
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lol! Hermione is always ready for a spanking. ;-)
person margiere
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is an ass. Draco is caught in an unyielding position. It seems that there is really no way dear old Dad would be willing to bend in his convictions even at this point. And I believe Draco is starting to realize that he wants warmth, happiness and love in his life. Can't Snape just mesmerized Lucius into believing it's in his family's best interest to allow Draco to choose a non pureblooded bride? If that won't work maybe he can make him into a snack. Hermione's reaction to the letter was telling. Her empathy for the situation is amazing. After all they have been through you just want them to be able to shag like little bunnies and be happy. Maybe the room can given them some helpful inspiration. If that doesn't work than I love Draco's method of distraction. I'm enjoying this story more and more. Great work!
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That's it. I'm in love.
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Maybe those two should start keeping a journal about what they really want with each other, then have the room switch it and they end up reading the others lol. But that would end things much sooner I suppose. Anyways, looking forward to more!
schedule February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aw, glad they got to have a Christmas! Figures Lucy would go and nearly ruin it though. Given that the room itself is magic, I have to wonder if it would be able to make a working telly, at least working in that they are able to watch movies and such, possibly based of Hermione's memories and maybe even those of students that grew up with that sort of thing. Anyways, can't wait to read more!
schedule February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Boo hiss to Lucius!!! Way to ruin a good day. ARGH!!! But, I am glad Draco shook himself out of it and decided to have a good day, despite his father. I hope they have a lovey Christmas and a few more barriers break down. They should take note that the room is happy with them for the time being. lol Thank you! HG4eva