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by goldhorse

schedule February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your line about Mother Nature cracked me up. Mostly because I see her as shown in "A Year Without a Santa Claus." lol Anyway, thank you. Interesting twist to the story and it makes me wonder if there might not be another child on the way... hmmm Until your next update, thank you, HG4eva Oh, and stay warm!
person draginedreamer
schedule February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I must say, i enjoy checking the forum and seeing youve updated! I love what youve done and i cant wait to see what the room does in retaliation!
person mizuki serenity
schedule February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
the story is great ! I wish you could update more often .. but , hey .. I just wish you could continue it .. I can't wait to know what the room really intends them to do .. :-)
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD WHAT'S GOING ON?!?!?!?!?! Is the room torturing them with painful memories or something...? Visions of a dark future without them together...? Why do you do this to us?!?!?!?! Please update soon!!!!!!! I wanna see what's next!!!!!!!
schedule February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, I am glad he got to enjoy a Christmas and thank you for that. I am also glad she saw the letter, but not happy with her interpretation, or his, of what has to be done about it. Sigh... Maybe the room can convince them t ofind another way. *insert evil smirk here*. Thanks! HG4eva
schedule February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Haven't left you a review in a while (purely due to my laziness, not due to me not reading) I am loving what you are doing with this story. They really pissed the room off now, curious to see what hell you are going to inflict on them next. ^_^
person Omg
schedule February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
More more more! ASAP!!! It's gotten so good please update this regularly!!!
person Kimbovet
schedule February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dun dun dun! Now they'll find out what an angry RoR can do. >:-{
schedule February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Snorted soda when the room freaked out on them. Thank you!! That was perfect! I look forward to seeing what punishment it throws at them for being so obstinate. lol Thank you!!! And, be nice to your in-laws. :-) HG4eva
schedule February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What on earth are you planning in that crazy little head of yours o.O And what ghost is going to pop up and scold them. Because that is what I am guessing, a ghost lol. Maybe Lily. Can't wait to read more!