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by goldhorse

person Kimbovet
schedule February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Trelawney's great-great-grandmother & Jules Verne? That's what I like about your writing. You come up with these interesting ideas, research them, & just make them work. More please.
person Carly
schedule February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Severus and Lily! or Narcissa and some muggle-born boy!
schedule February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least the lack of food and warmth hasn't completely dimmed her brain. lol I now hope Draco can give her some hope. :-) Thanks again!! HG4eva
schedule February 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Okay boys and girls, let's put on our thinking caps... What could the room be saying? lol Thank you again. Looking forward to more, HG4eva
person Jordan
schedule February 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this new development i cant wait for more!
person Citten
schedule February 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
poor shakespeare, well now we see even more of the tragdy that was his life (well from another opition, anyways.) well we are seeing even more of the sad truths of the room, now i cant wait to see who is up next and i am really loving the twists so far and i do hope that you have lots more planned and that no more mother nature will be interuping your posting! :) well draco and hermoine will maybe see that they are not so far away as the might think and well i will wait to see what you do... post soon!!! i am just dying to see what happens next! :)
person anaidra
schedule February 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
No wonder the room is the way it is. All those times seeing and witnessing people being hurt and heartbroken because of some rules and beliefs, pride, fear.... Hopefully, Draco and Hermione will be able to learn and change their future. (of course with little help ;))
Look forward to reading the next chapter.
person margiere
schedule February 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! Thanks so much for the special note, I was so giddy when I read it that I had a silly smile the rest of the afternoon. I wish I did have some psychic ability, I surely use it to see what was in store next for my favorite couple. I believe Draco is on the right track asking what the Room hoped to prove with showing them the founders. Salazar's prejudice did start hundreds of years is blood prejudice and 2 wars but if no one subscribed to his beliefs would it have that been obverted? Just like the American Civil War and Aparthied, nothing moved forward until the people with power and influence saw a reason to change. There has to be a start, and with that start comes a sacrafice. I think Hermione and Draco are in a no win situation, if they separate they sacrafice love for a life of misery. The room and history have shown them that there was no happiness for the two other separated lovers. We know Draco loses his families support if he tries to stay together but what does Hermione have to lose? I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope your injured little gets better. Until Later :-)
person Kimbovet
schedule February 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow...Romeo & Juliet in reality. What more unhappy history will you show us? Hopefully the RoR will take some pity on the two soon.
schedule February 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!! Keep those memories coming!!! They both need to get it through their thick skulls that they can just tell Lucius to get fucked and let them marry!!!!! You're killing me!!!! :D If you're killing me with these chapters, but I love it, does that make me a masochist...?