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by goldhorse

person Kimbovet
schedule March 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm thinking the room should give them some food soon. Wouldn't want them to starve to death. And then maybe Snape will stop by just to make them more uncomfortable. Keep 'em coming. :-)
schedule March 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really sad. Poor Sev. *gives him a hug* Honestly, at this point I am half expecting you to go "surprise" and have it be the room and the past spirits of those people, or at least the women working together to try and show these two what they need to do. Great chapter as always, can't wait to read more.
person Margiere
schedule March 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*Lots of hugs to Snape*. The Room has shown our couple Love torn apart maybe it will take another angle now? Maybe a couple that despite the adversity stayed together? Hey maybe something totally unexpected like a Boogart! They each would have to see the other worst fear and confront it. Whatever the next challenge I can't wait. I hope your interview went well. Great chapterm
schedule March 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First and foremost... ME!!!!! I volunteers *waves hand madly* Man, they are so close and so far away from figuring out what they need to do. lol I can't believe how hard it is for them to see it. ha ha ha I can't wait to see how the room surprises them next. But, I also hope they get some food soon, too. lol Thanks! HG4eva
person margiere
schedule February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is so heartbreaking. All those centuries have past and there has been no improvement in blood purity relations. And does Snapes cryptic comments before he left for the holidays have a similar history? I hope the Room grants them some food soon. It got to be terrible being naked, cold and hungry.
schedule February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wheres my almost daily update? you have me so hooked on this story, not only is it well written but also riveting with your whole plot twists. i keep finding myself refreshing my browser every 10 min or so hoping there's a new chapter T-T sorry if i sound demanding, i just love your writing is all
schedule February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was so glad to see the new chapter! It makes my day so much better reading them! And are we instilling a few Gryffindoric tendencies into our little snake...? I sincerely hope so. Hermione's looking a little Snapeish in her gloom.... Now that the room has added a slightly more optimistic couple, could it be that it's going to show them a couple that actually makes it work...? Maybe even the Tonks family...? It'd certainly be an excellent example....
schedule February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
My guess will be Sev and whoever he is disappearing to see lol. If it is a who at least. Great chapter though, I think it is starting to sink in for the two obviously. Now if they can just realize that they can have it! After all, nothing worth having was ever easy.
schedule February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you once again for the wonderful chapter. i had been awaiting the posting of this one impatiently, just as i shall for the next ones XD. i really do love your writing, you have a way of making it flow and work, so much to the point that i created an account and you are the first person i have ever reviewed on here in the multitude of years i have been reading on this site. please keep up your wonderful work
schedule February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
SO the more I read of this story, the more I fall in love with it! I get so excited to see every time you upload a new chapter. Where did you get the ideas for all the "starstruck" couples from? I will say it's pretty ingenious... in my humble opinion! I can't wait until you upload again! :D