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by goldhorse

person Kimbovet
schedule March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So the RoR can show them anything that happened in the castle. They could be in there for a while then. Hopefully, those 2 finally learn what the room is trying to teach them before they starve to death.
schedule March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nope! Did NOT see that coming at all. Wow! Okay, I know you're really busy, but please update again soon, okay? I need to know who this baby became! I have my theories, but you keep surprising me, so I will wait and see. lol Thanks! HG4eva
schedule March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WHAAAAATTTT?!?!?!?!?!?!?! SNAPE AND LILY HAD A GIRL?!?!?!?!?! What's she like? Are we going to meet her? Did Snape stop checking on her when Lily died or did he continue in earnest? And WHY DOES MUSE BOG YOU DOWN SO DAMN MUCH?! But we love the stories you crank out when she gets into slave-drive mode. :D You never disappoint. <3
person buttercup
schedule March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
so harry gets a sister!! does he ever get to meet her?
person jordan
schedule March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Harry has a half sister?!?!?!
person DB1
schedule March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@25 wow wasn't expecting that!! Looking forward for more!! Please update soon

DB
person Kimbovet
schedule March 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ahha! That's who Snape's going off to visit. Didn't really see that coming. Eagerly awaiting whatever your Muse has you writing.
schedule March 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this! I love how you're going into Severus' and Lily's relationship... it's something I've not seen much in stories and I love the idea! I think the baby is Hermione? Maybe? haha I can't wait to see if my thoughts are correct ;) I love your writing and can't wait to read more of Beyond the Pale either!
schedule March 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow...didn't see that coming o.o...is that where sev keeps going? To see his kid? I'll bet Harry would love to know that he has a sister...even a half sister. Can't wait to read more.
schedule March 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think the room needs to do something nice, for once.... Hell, maybe it'll let Dumbledore try to lead them in the right direction. lol