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for Locked In

by goldhorse

person Christopher
schedule March 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Merlin needs a wakeup call. In ALL of those cases, if those people had challenged the status quo of the day, they would have ended up dead or worse anyway. So, it's the classic no-win situation, damned if you do, damned if you don't.
person Anon
schedule March 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
pregnant hermione soon?
person Kimbovet
schedule March 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh hell! Merlin's involved now. I'm happy you gave us this view of Snape's family & his vampire turning. Hopefully, he finds them because Harry needs to see his remaining family.
person Anon
schedule March 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Noooooo please please please update soon! I am dying for them to get back together!! When will they ever get over their stubbornness?!?
person margiere
schedule March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Whoaaa!!! They had a baby girl together! Didn't see that one coming. Now I have so many questions, I can imagine Hermione and Draco have just as many. What other secrets has the room held onto? Is Snape with his daughter during the Hoildays? And will the room ever give Hermione and Draco some food and warmth?
person anaidra
schedule March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was great!!! I liked it....wonder what happened with little Venus. Oh, more more more please :).
schedule March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter, I am glad it is showing them the consequences instead of just the pain the couples suffered in ending it.
person DB1
schedule March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@27 loving all the flashbacks and history!!! Update soon

DB
person margiere
schedule March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The Room has access to all of the castle's memories! Then the room knows of the current environment involving Hermione and Draco's containment. Who is missing them and who isn't, who will support them and who won't. I hope the message is getting through to our couple. They have fought for everything else (well Hermione has fought longer) they believed in why not this. Now, you are absolutely amazing at keeping me guessing at what is coming next. I hope there are lots more chapters to this story, it is so fascinating. I'm starting to wonder what will become of their lives "if" they make it out of the Room?
person Christopher
schedule March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Little problem with the story: In the Harry Potter canon, there is NO spell that can steal someone's magic from them, it's just impossible to do.