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for Locked In

by goldhorse

person DB1
schedule March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@30 at least they are safe now. Interested to see how their relationship will go in the real world.

DB
schedule March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay! They are out, that's a good thing. I can understand them not wanting to share things that the room showed them, but at the very least they should share the vision of them being sacrificed with Sev. Clearly that was at least partially accurate given how the man bolted. Can't wait to read more!
person Kimbovet
schedule March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hurray they're out!!! I loved Draco being all protective of Hermione despite being so weak. I think the room let them out so they could try & stop this plot that the mysterious healer appears to be is involved in.
person margiere
schedule March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The Room let them out! Go away for a long weekend and I miss a lot. The nightmares were truly horrible but it finally got the message thru to our stubborn couple. How in the world was the room was able to do that? It was so incredible that they are actually out, I can wait to see what comes next. Please let Snape catch up with Emmanuel for some answers. He will be able to smell any lies that may come out of his mouth and if he doesn't like the answers then he can take appropriate actions...(*I do so love vampire Snape*)

Hope you interview went well. I'm so said that this story is drawing to a close. I started on your other one-shot stories and now I'm reading your other works. You are truly an amazing writer. I wish I didn't have to go to work so that I could read all day long. Keep up the great work.
schedule March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Again I say, didn't see that coming. lol You keep surprising me. :-) I am going to guess it let them out because it had made its point and didn't want them to die before they had a chance to keep their promise. But, WTF?! The healer is their killer?! Looking forward to more! Thanks, HG4eva
schedule March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story love the attention to detail in their love making and each side of the characters thinking.
person anaidra
schedule March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This was wonderful. I dont know what else to say. Just...please keep going!!
schedule March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
NOOO!!!!! Why...? We love this one too.... I'm incredibly attached to this one. I'll be re-reading it all the time. ALL the time. I'm wondering who that shrill voice belonged to.... The deep voice, I don't give a shit about. But the one that said they handed themselves over makes me wonder.... I'm excited to see where this goes. :) I... ugh.... Can't think.... Shit.... Don't kill it, please...? :)
person Sapphire Phoenix
schedule March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I adore your Hermione-Draco stories and this one is very interesting. But then again, you never disappoint me. I love your bite-sized chapters on this one that allows you to update more frequently. I still await the new additions to your other offerings with tremendous anticipation.
person Kimbovet
schedule March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Maybe they've finally figured out what the room is trying to tell them. I love this story (& all your stories) & will be sad when it is done. KUTGW!