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for Locked In

by goldhorse

person jordan
schedule March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Mpore more more more more more Mre More MORE!!!!
schedule March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I know they came out of the room on January 3rd, but what day did they go in; just trying to get an idea of how long they were in the room for.
Still loving this story, sorry haven't reviewed in a while, been busy doing work so have been reading in the few spare moments I have and not had time to fight the AFF review system. ^_^
person Kimbovet
schedule March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
How is Hermione a Lady? I expect Snape may blow his gasket a wee bit when they tell him about what the RoR showed them about him but it should be therapeutic. KUTGW
schedule March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad to know there's more coming! *insert happy dance* I wondered if it was all real since no one else showed up, especially Harry and McGonagall. So, thanks for explaining that. lol Also very happy they have decided to not anger the castle again. Snort! They are slow, but not stupid. ha ha ha Thank you, HG4eva
person Cat
schedule March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this! I really hope Snape has found or will find his mate and daughter I felt so bad for him. Can't wait to see how they handle their relationship outside of the room-and how they'll handle being apart once they're healthy enough to leave the hospital since I doubt it'd be looked kindly upon for them to room together. post soon!
schedule March 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh god.... No one's going to believe them.... They have to tell Severus what they saw. He's not going to like it though.... Maybe they can help him find Venus and perhaps she could help them stay safe...?
person Miss Eyre
schedule March 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really don't know what to write in this thing, but I feel that some sort of response would be nice. Honestly I think this story is fabulous, fabulous in the sparkly exciting lovely enthralling sense. Great job and I hope you keep on writing. Kudos.
person Jo
schedule March 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was a fun chapter. Can't wait for the next.
person DB1
schedule March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@29 sneaky room!!! Update soon

DB
person Anon
schedule March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay, they are out! Now what? Where those visions or warnings or what? I can't wait to find out!!!!