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by goldhorse

schedule March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love that they threw caution to the wind for a while there, and that the castle is being so apologetic. lol I am sorry Snape walked in on them though, cause I imagine that was an immediate mood killer for them. Snort! But, poor Severus. I hope they can help him. Thank you, hon!! I love this little tale! HG4eva
schedule March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter as always. I hope that if Harry and Ron do freak out on Hermione over Draco, that she remembers she is a powerful witch with a wand. She could set them straight pretty quickly. Can't wait to read more!
schedule March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I don't know what I feel right now. There's hope, but also fear. There's longing for them to open up to the world, but also a desire for them to hide. I want Snape to find his family, that I know for sure. I want Harry and Ron to be accepting. I want Draco to have friends. Man, I want a lot. lol Thank you, hon! HG4eva
schedule March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, Harry is forever getting hurt, and Hermione hasn't been one to think twice about slapping someone when they mouth off, plus accidents happen in Potions all the time and those knives are quite sharp, also I'm sure she knows a spell or two to draw blood, plus there is a certain Slytherin who could quietly hex a nose bleed out of him if he needs too... *rambles for twenty minutes* ...Yeah, I'm sure she'll have the blood by lunch time....
person Citten
schedule March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I so love this story!!! :) i am sorry that this was slow being posted but i did want my two 'sickles' worth ;) story #3 is probably my first choice, then story #2 i love dancing :), then story #1 (don't know how i am going to like the severus/harry combo, but i will give it a shot).
hey i am dying to know what lucius really said and did that first time and i do hope that you will be giving us a flash back on that one. :) i am excited to see what they will be doing to help severus! :) Post soon! :)
schedule March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I knew it! He couldn't have asked a better pair to help him. If anyone can find them, those two would be the ones to do it. Perhaps, it'll aid them in keeping one step ahead of the healer-butcher...?
schedule March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ahh I'm so happy I can finally review. I don't know what's held me back in creating an account. But any who. I'm REALLY REALLY loving this one. It's my absolute favorite right now. I love the whole idea of the plot line. Your writing flows together nicely as well. I'm going to be super sad when it ends. I really enjoy the whole awkwardness scenes with Snape, they add a small bit of humor to a not so uplifting story. Thank you for writing, can't wait for chapters to come~
person DB1
schedule March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@33 poor snape! Look forward to reading more!!

DB
person Cat
schedule March 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Number 2 and 3 sound very interesting, tho I'd read any that you post lol
person Kimbovet
schedule March 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nothing like some good old fashioned hospital bed smut to tide one over! Keep 'em coming. ;-)