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for Locked In

by goldhorse

schedule April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you've got Internet again. It sucks being without it, and crazy Librarians can be pretty scary. I'm loving the story, well all of them actually. Keep up the great work.
schedule March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Public librarians are such stiffs.... And I really do hope this thing with Sev really works. He's always so damn sad. :(
schedule March 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, the library can be a bit uppity in that respect, but at the same time, it is understandable. Great chapter! Really great idea on Hermione's part to use that as an excuse to get the blood. Poor Sev, I really hope it works. Can't wait to read more hun!
person DB1
schedule March 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@36 lol poor Harry!! Update soon

DB
person Josie
schedule March 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've been wondering how Hermione was going to get Harry's blood - didnt consider she would stab him though :) I hope Harry gets to know Venus she's probably the only nice member of his family that are still living :)

Keep up the good work :) xx
person Kimbovet
schedule March 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to Snape & Venus reuniting & Harry getting to know his half sister.
person GoodGirlsBadBoys00
schedule March 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like this story very much! I like the added dimensions to Snape, and I love the way the D/H relationship is developing. The declaration kiss in front of McGonagal was perfect.
I am confused though. I must have missed a chapter that explains why Hermione now hates Harry and Ron. As far as I remember she was still best friends with them and enemies with Draco, when she went into the RoR... But she came out of the room hating them. She's now spiteful and cruel to them with no remorse. Did miss something?
Thanks!
schedule March 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I trust you to write your story your way, so I will hold off on comments about Harry and Ron for now... I hope Severus gets his family back, too. He's suffered long enough. Thanks again! :-) HG4eva
person anaidra
schedule March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter. It is so nice to see them together and being there for each other. Keep going. I love this story!
schedule March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I would LOVE to see Hermione hex Lucius to the ceiling...I'm sure Draco would too XD Great chapter. Poor Nott and Daphne, hope they can get a happy ending.