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by goldhorse

person Sapphire Phoenix
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Another chapter! I adore these small chapters, because it usually means that you update quicker. I cannot wait to see how you have Ron react to this news...please don't make me wait too long. (Big, pitiful, puppy eyes)
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!!! I KNEW IT!!!!!! I FUCKING KNEW IT!!!!!! Dude, you could post this every fucking day and I'll be a happy camper. :D I was waiting for this bombshell to happen. And I'm so glad they've outed themselves. It's fitting Harry's the first one to know. He's the most even tempered of them all. And you know he loves her like a sister. He's the one everyone will turn to when the shit hits the fan. He's the one that'll turn the tide. If anyone's going to be able to help convince the public to embrace this change, it's Harry. Now, my only question is, where the fuck are Venus and Naomi? If the spell worked, why didn't they respond to Snape? Are they in some kind of trouble?
person MangoChaCha
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Im still here.. and I love it!!!!
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I cannot express how much I am loving this story! I so did not see Hermione getting pregnant, even though they've been practicing enough ;) How did the spell get deactivated? My best guess would be that the RoR decided to be sneaky and, after they decided to make a go of it, deactivated the spell using its magic? That's the only thing I can come up with though, I can't wait to see what you'll do with it! And I'm also really excited to see what Lucius' reaction to the pregnancy will be: he's gonna be pissed!
Amazing amazing job on the story so far: I wait with bated breath for you to update again!
person Anon
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! So much good stuff
person Kimbovet
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Glad Harry & Hermione made up. I knew she would end up pregnant after all that time in the RoR. Sounds like the RoR decided they had met the conditions of a marriage contract, which broke the spell on Draco. Update this & the others as you can.
person The truth
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well honestly, I kinda give up when it takes for every for updates. This just happened to be at the top of the list so I picked it back up but I like how Harry Ginny and Luna know and te pregnancy twist is interesting. It's a very good story. Just update when you can I guess:)
person Bajagirl
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I want more!!! (I feel like a greedy little kid asking for thirds) ;)
person anaidra
schedule April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hope Severus finds his family soon. It must had been hard for him to know they are somewhere there and not be able to be with them. He deserves to be happy after everything. Also, look forward to seeing Harry and Venus meeting for the first time :).
Anyway, poor Harry. But I guess once he is told about Venus and everything he will understnad why Hermione did what she did and why she didnt want to tell even her friend(s) more about her and Draco and their RoR experience just yet.
schedule April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Glad Harry and Hermione made up. I hope Sev was able to find them! It really is evil, you not telling us what happened and all lol. Glad you got your comp working again! Can't wait to read more.