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by goldhorse

person LilyKiara
schedule April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love how fast you update this fic! It's perfection. Great and unique plot, with non-ooc characters and super fast update and an okay vocabulary, grammar and punctuation
person Lily
schedule April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
At first, I didn't know what INCONCEIVABLE mean. and I thought that it derived from the word CONCEIVE, but I looked into the dictionary and read that it meant IMPOSSIBLE or UNTHINKABLE. I didn't expect it to turn out to be both, the chapter having a 'conceive theme' and it was very unthinkable, meaning that I did not thought that she was going to be pregnant. Well, I thought about it in the few first chapters of them having sex but the timing was unexpected! I LOVE IT!
person Sapphire Phoenix
schedule April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Whaddaya mean no post tomorrow because of your birthday?! You should honor your birth by posting a chapter and allow us to lavish you with reviews on the superiority of your writing. Have you noticed how many hits you have? That should tell you something....
person DB1
schedule April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@40 I knew Ron would explode with anger. Stupid weasley. He better not ruin this for hermione and Draco! Yay for snape! Update soon!

DB
person TinkerBabe7
schedule April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy they are getting married so soon :D
Hopefully it'll be a wonderful wedding.
Wooooohooooo Venus is back!
I wonder how things will go once Severous tells Harry about his half-sister...
Well I hope you have a wonderful birthday! :D
You get wiser with age :D :D

Well can't wait for a new chapter
person margiere
schedule April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY! And now there will be a wedding and Venus is back! What a day. I know I'm little crazy but I love reading about Ron Weasley losing it over Hermione moving on to Draco. I never thought he deserved her. He is too quick to condemn and utterly clueless most of the time.

Venus coming back is wonderful. She obviously loves her father. I hope she likes Draco and Hermione too, I think they would all get along beautifully. I just wonder where Naomi is and why she isn't there too. Having the Room as the wedding location is and isn't that much of a surprise. The room has seen and been a part of so much so why not make the Room part of the wedding party. I just wonder will it be a traditional 'wizard' wedding or the modern 'western' wedding? And does Draco have to observe any particular ritual by Malfoy traditions for his new bride to be recognize as a true Malfoy? Lucius is one badass man so I'm sure there are all kinds of trick in his family history
person colao
schedule April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday!! Love this story, but I can wait for a birthday celebration ;)
person FicFan
schedule April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First time I've ever reviewed a story. I decided I had to tell you that I love your stories. I've been reading your stories since Bound was still a work in progress! I love your writing style and how you can twist the story in a way that makes it so believable. I wanted to wish you a happy birthday and let you know that I'm a huge fan of all your stories and your posts always brighten my day!
person TInkerBabe7
schedule April 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! She's preggos.
Wait... Even though I think it's awesome I don't think it was the best timing.
Man that was a twist about Draco being sterile but I guess the ROR fixed that lol.
I wonder what they are going to do once Hermione is awake.
Obviously they're are going to keep it but still....
ohhh and Snape. Dun dun dunnnnn lol
Well I can't wait to read more :D
person anaidra
schedule April 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, I wasnt expecting it :). Not really. But loved it! Cant wait for more. Love love the story!