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by goldhorse

person margiere
schedule April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was a Beautiful Wedding. The Founders giving their blessing was incredible, as was Magdalene being with both of her parents. I wonder if that means that in death all the wronged couples were able to find their initial loves?
I'm so proud of Hermione in taking the initiative and telling Harry of Venus herself. Harry is much more open to Hermione than he would have been to Severus.

The directive to share their love with the world, that's more than just figurative right? I wonder how they can help the other now? Hermione is not one to let an injustice go and Draco too seems to want to help his House mates. I just hope that when the world at large finds out about their marriage that Lucius is so shocked that his brain short circuits and is rendered mute for the immediate future.
person TheLadyGranger-Malfoy
schedule April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow I can't wait for the next half! I really want to see Lucius' reaction. I bet Narcissa would be over the moon to have a granddaughter. (<<
person TheLadyGranger-Malfoy
schedule April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow I can't wait for the next half! I really want to see Lucius' reaction. I bet Narcissa would be over the moon to have a granddaughter. (No sarcasm there I think she would be happy). You have a wonderful story.
person Sapphire Phoenix
schedule April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You just love those cliffies-dontcha?
person Yessss!
schedule April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First of all thankyou for updating regularly, not every author cares about their fans like you do. Secondly this is amazing! This story is so good I wish you could like mini publish it or get it put in a book of fan fictions greatest. I love your imagination and character development! I can't wait to read more:)
schedule April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story so I was fortunate enough to read it over a couple days. I have to tell you that you have crafted a beautiful and touching story that I will be sure to reread many times. Thank you for taking the time to share it.
person Kimbovet
schedule April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful wedding & I'm so glad Magdalene & the Founders were part of it! But you & your evil cliffhangers!
schedule April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You tease, leaving us hanging just before Harry had a chance to react. ^_^
person anaidra
schedule April 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The next chapter please :).
Really nice of Draco to want for Hermione to have as perfect wedding as possible considering their situation. Glad that Ron is there for her as her friend.
Also, cant wait to know more about Venus and for her and Harry to meet.
Keep going!
person Seren
schedule April 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love reading your stories, they show how complex the characters; how they adapt to new situations... plus most of all love not seeing Hermione with Ron, my reasons are mostly because she is intelligent thoughtful woman, she needs someone who can stimulate her intelligence and not belittle her; see that she is shining jewel. Keep up wonderful work and hope you had wonderful birthday!!