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by goldhorse

schedule April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The game is afoot! :D I really hope they can give back the dowry. It's nice to know Nott can make his own decisions with his life.
person Marji
schedule April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story makes me so giddy. I absolutely love when Draco shows his protective masculine side *sigh*. I so hope that Theo and Daphne end up with who they love. All of these couples are like the never ending cycle of misery and hopefully the cycle is broken. Please update soon I am defiantly looking forward to the next chapter.

P.S. I can totally commiserate with whatever sicky germs you have because I have the sunburn from hell and everyone at school insist on telling me I have a sunburn and the proceeding to touch it and let me tell you it really hurts! So anyway I hope you feel better.
schedule April 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm not even going to begin to guess. There are so many possibilities. I can't wait for the next one though. HURRY UP!!!!! lol I'm weird when I'm tired. I think I'm going to re-read this whole thing tomorrow. lol That'd be fun. :D
schedule April 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I missed the last chapter, but it was great to read two!! :-) I am excited to see the "sap" and the changes they will bring about. I look forward to everyone else's reaction to their declaring their love in front of everyone. tee hee hee Thanks and I look forward to more, HG4eva
schedule April 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, is this a small little twist? Is Daphne going to ask Hermione for help in finding a loophole or some sort of advice? Can't wait to read more!
schedule April 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
RON SAID SOMETHING INTELLIGENT!!!!! :O Mark this day on the damn calendar! :D And I do so hope they've found a loophole in the contract. No one deserves to be locked into a marriage they don't want to be in.... :( Now the question is... Did anyone overhear Ron talking about Hermione and Draco's kid...? Not everyone in Hogwarts is as understanding as their little group.....
person margiere
schedule April 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so maybe Ron has more than 2 brain cells knocking around in his head. I just wish he thought everything out like that comment he made about Hermione's future child. Ron really can be an insensitive pig when he doesn't think things through. I like how Draco is taking a different path in announcing his and Hermione's relationship. Hiding their love didn't work for any of the past couples so a more direct route will have the effort the castle (and everyone else) is hoping for.

Venus is wonderful. I had hope she would be a good fit with the group. Since she didn't go to Hogwarts she shouldn't be lumped into the house prejudices. So maybe she can be kind of an ambassador to all the houses. One of the biggest problem with Hogwarts was that the houses didn't really intermingle outside of the classroom. Hold on, does the school at large know the she is Snape's daughter? If they do than that blows my theory out of the water. Maybe not, she is still Harry Potter's sister. Just forget I said anything, this could get confusing if I keep this up!
I knew it wouldn't bee long before you through another cliffie at us. Who knows, maybe Daphne has some inside knowldge that could help her sister?
person Sapphire Phoneix
schedule April 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AArrggghh!! I feel like we're dangling by our fingertips, gain a handhold and then *someone* pours massage oil on the rocks. (Narrowed eyes and foot tapping). I cannot wait until Narcissa finds out not only is she going to be a grandmother, but Draco is cleverly providing her with a girl. I also extremely hopeful (big, puppy dog eyes) that the other star crossed lovers get their happy endings and that our happy couple is starting a revolution. Please update soon.
person Citten
schedule April 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love sap! :) we all need it sometimes in our lives! :)
Happy Belated Birthday! (better late than never- besides its is alway nice to have late gifts and wishes!)
i am excited to see what lucius will do and how he finds out! now you can always leave some end not done...SEQUELS! :) you could also just make it longer, and longer, and longer....
well you get the picture! :) Post soon!!
person anaidra
schedule April 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? Hmmm, I love this story. Please update soon :).