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Wow, they are really pushing for this aren't they? Good for them! If this works, there will be two more happy couples! Great chapter hun, and thanks for explaining that for me!

As someone who works the night shift of a very physically demanding job every day of the week, I feel for you. It sucks. Anyway....

So... if Daphne's still a virgin, and the contract is still intact, what now...? Is there another way to wheedle their way out of it...? I'm sure there has to be someone they can bribe, persuade, and/or threaten to get this thing voided, yeah...?

I've very much enjoyed this story. I'm very happy that it has focused mostly on Hermione and Draco. Your other stories spend to much time focusing on other pairings, which is one of the reason why I never finish them. The other reason is that the stories are often bogged down with either superfluous detail or to much filler.

You know how to pull a reader in with your work, which is something many authors lack.If you do decide to publish in the future (I think you'd do well) get a good editor because he/she will help you focus your story and cut the fat.

Again, I really like this story.

eta:I don't mind the side pairings in this story because you're not spending to many words on them, unlike in your other stories.

More please :)!
So glad they are helping Daphne and Theo.
And what was it at the end of the chapter? Hermione fighting with everything she had againts Dracos probation ;).

Great chapter as always. I am slightly confused on the marriage contract thing though, are you saying that because of the magic placed on them due to the contract itself that if they sleep with each other it is considered a marriage, or if they sleep with someone else, ie, the one they really want, it is considered a marriage? Or either/or? Anyways, can't wait to read more!

Hello! I am not sure if I reviewed the last one, so if I didn't, I do apologize. I have had a VERY busy weekend with the opening of my show and rehearsals for another. lol But anyway... another lovely chapter and I hope they are right that Naomi will find her child, and therefore Severus. :-) Thank you, HG4eva

Oh My Gods! I hate you, I hate you, I hate you. You just had to leave a damn cliffhanger didn't you. I very nearly had and aneurism when I read the last line, and I nearly fell off my chair. I absolutely adore "Locked In", you writing style is magnificent, the grammar is accurate, the plot is intriguing and I am eagerly awaiting the next installment. May the Muses look favorably upon you and bring lots of inspiration.
Sincerely Your Adoring Fan,
Marjorie (Marji)

Great chapter! I hope they can get them out of the marriages. Can't wait to read more!

More, more please. Viva revolution!!!

I absolutely love this story. Thank you for posting so frequently.