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by goldhorse

schedule April 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Snape's happy! And another wedding in the works!!!! YAHOO!!!!! Okay, so now when do we get to see Draco beat the snot out of Lucius...? He's gotta get his ass kicked for something! lol Also, what's going to happen with that creep healer...? Knowing you, he'll make a surprise appearance SOMEWHERE....
schedule April 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! I hope they get to be eternally happy now. :-) Thank you! HG4eva
person DB1
schedule April 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@48 love it!!! Update!!


DB
schedule April 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Glad she is back! I'm surprised Sev didn't just flat out tackle her lol. Ooh, more weddings! Wonderful news. This is going to cause quite the stir around the school lol. Poor Hermione though, morning sickness sucks. Can't wait to read more hun! Good luck with the other two stories.
person margiere
schedule April 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, Naomi is back. I'm so happy for Severus. He has his family safe and together for the first time. That man so deserves all the happiest and love he can get. Hopefully the loving part doesn't tire him out to much. Although it would be extremely funny, I don't think the student body of Hogwarts is ready to see a bone-wary and deliriously happy Professor Snape. The poor kids are still getting us to Hermione and Draco's relationship, a grinning Snape may cause chaos.

I have a question about Draco's former marriage contract. If he was to marry Pansy, what has she been doing the last couple of months? Draco's 'dating' relationship with Hermione is common knowledge at Hogwarts now so is she just looking at it as his last hurrah before she gets him? Or are their friends keeping her away from the couple? Maybe Pansy has her own secret love interest somewhere in the Castle?

And Draco's dear father has been quite silent. I kind of hoped that Severus would be the one to put Lucius in his place for his cruel comment about Severus not being a real father. Maybe Narcissa can free herself and take the man down a few pegs. Just as long as in his final moments Lucius gets to see everything he has lied, cheated, bullied and killed to get go drain the drain and he will have less than nothing. A forgotten waste of a man (not even the honor of being consider a wizard). I think being forgotten and dismissed by everyone would be a punishment that Lucius enormous ego couldn't take. Sometime just killing off the criminals is not enough of a punishment, don't get me wrong some evil simply needs to die. I just get happy thinking about a magic-less Lucius working as a Walmart Greeter:-)
person Kimbovet
schedule April 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!, Naomi's back! Now for the double wedding. Could it be a triple wedding with Snape & Naomi? Maybe the Muse wants you to finish this story before she lets you write on the other 2 stories. Keep on plugin' on!
schedule April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
looooooooooooooooooooooooving it :D
This story is so amazing with awesome twist.
I can't wait to see what happens next ;)
schedule April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!! I get a little confused on the technical stuff, sometimes.... Especially since I'm usually reading these at three in the morning. And shock therapy is an EXCELLENT strategy. :D If you're going to change the world, jump in with both feet. Half-assed gets you nowhere.

P.S.: I have the same problem all the time. Mine gets so bad that my chapters have been months apart. I had 1 year and 14 days between chapters 8 and 9. So, yeah.... As far as I can remember, the most you've gone is a month.... So, yeah. Don't feel bad. :)
schedule April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well my fingers are crossed for them. I hope they get some supporters quickly, because I have a feeling Lucius will be appearing again soon. EEK! I loved the scene with Draco and Theo. Thank you!! HG4eva
person anaidra
schedule April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chap 47 and 48 - good job! :) Also Draco and Hermione are doing really good job helping others find their happiness. And I loved it when Draco pushed Nott againts the wall ;). It is nice to see how he protect and defend Hermione. Cant wait for update.